Recent Comments

Martin
3/13/22, 9:52 PM
I'm not really into puppy play, but this story is really great! I loved every second, I loved the twists, it's really a combination of a hot wank story and a witty intriguing read. Not sure if I understand that final twist in the last sentence though. Maybe too much of my blood is down there instead of in my brain...

3/14/22, 12:39 AM
@Martin well it's revealed that the end that Mitch, who William used to lure in Perry, is actually known to Jonas. Did they meet afterwards, or did Jonas know him before Perry went over to the house? ho is really out to control who?
3/14/22, 12:22 AM
Very fun and sexy. Personally I don't really like it when people or cocks get shrunk, or people get made fat. So I would have enjoyed the story more if Yusef had just turned into an elf (maybe a slutty twink elf) and was still dwarfed by his cousin being 7 ft tall. But that's just my personal preference. s far as example of computer rewriting reality it's pretty good
3/13/22, 9:43 PM
I'm actually happy with this ending, they were both able to get something from the dom/sub dynamic but they were able to realise that it wasn't good for them. A great story will defiantly be reading your other story and any stories that may come after that.

3/13/22, 10:53 PM
@Bunny0Boi Aww thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. Great to have you on board, and hope you will enjoy reading my other stories too.
3/13/22, 2:10 PM
Oh my god this is so hot and *cute*—I’m really excited to follow this one! I can’t wait for more.

3/13/22, 5:57 PM
@Soren Fitz thanks bud!
Cracker
3/13/22, 1:36 PM
Once again another hot as fuck story.

3/13/22, 5:57 PM
@Cracker awww thanks
3/13/22, 7:28 AM
SO glad to see this story here!

3/13/22, 5:56 PM
@stimle thanks bud
DaTs
3/12/22, 1:41 AM
So hot!
3/11/22, 9:18 PM
Love this. Top pov and rimming. It's quite perfect.
1/24/22, 12:30 PM
i wonder when will thos be continued

Blackjinx123
3/11/22, 5:29 PM
@Erratic101, sorry for the delay! I'm not sure when the next one will be posted as I'm currently working on getting the outline completed so writing can go a bit more smoothly in the future, new stories for this site and others, and battling writers block/burning out. please be patient with me and thanks so much for sticking with the story!
Elm
2/5/22, 5:26 AM
I'm finally caught up again. Such a great story! can't wait to see all the happy family together. Family nights are about to get A LOT more fun

Blackjinx123
3/11/22, 5:26 PM
@Elm, thank you so much! I have some very interesting combinations planned for the future, so look forward to it ;)