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3/18/22, 9:18 AM
Damn, this was so hot. Great twists, loved when William and Jonas were discussing how they'd hypnotised Perry in their owns ways while he wasn't there. He really is an owned pup! Loooooved the pup play, so exciting. I can't wait to see Perry become more of a pup if you decide to continue the story. The writing, set up, characters, and pacing were all incredibly well done. Amazing work, hats off! Can't wait to see what you do next, you're a very talented writer and have a creative mind. Thanks!

3/18/22, 12:50 PM
@Henry Wolf thank you so much for enjoying this story and for leaving such a wonderfully detailed comment!
3/18/22, 12:12 PM
Very Hot! Love the manipulation of this dumb jock. Since the doctor just showed him the only way he can cum is by pressure on his prostate, maybe sends him home with a special prostate applicator (dildo) to use each time he's horny...like daily when he smells his team mates in the locker room. gets caught in the stall riding the thick dong - photos and videos of him spread
Mar 31, 2019
Martin
3/17/22, 10:50 PM
Added to Collar... it seemed only suitable. Also very hot story!

Lotus-Silk
3/18/22, 4:47 AM
@Martin Aww, thank you so much for doing that! And thank you everyone for the thoughtful comments!
3/17/22, 3:35 PM
Can't wait for the chapter 4. I hope Jack gets used by Joe's
Mar 31, 2019
3/17/22, 2:04 PM
I think it’s very clever putting the story from the bully’s perspective when he doesn’t comprehend that he’s the bully—yeah, Tailang asked some unreasonable things at first, perhaps, but it becomes quickly clear that the POV is an absolute bitch. I can appreciate his comeuppance without feeling so bad for him.
3/17/22, 8:02 AM
awwww, I love the dynamic between those 3. So sexy. Jack is doing a great job protecting and serving
3/17/22, 7:39 AM
ooooooh,that's a nice twist in the power dynamics. I like that,good chapter
3/16/22, 11:46 PM
i thoroughly enjoyed this, particularly bringing him back to awareness. Well done!
3/15/22, 11:31 AM
woah that is so hot. love love love stinky feet. and the mind control is insanely hot too!!

Rubber_Lover14
3/15/22, 1:08 PM
@James Heller Thank you very much. as you can probably tell, i love smelly feet too. I'm glad you enjoyed the story

3/16/22, 8:49 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 well I thank you for it. Stinky feet are the happiness in life, and you brought a lot of happiness into my life
Art
3/15/22, 9:43 PM
I hope that you are going to continue this past the 17 chapters that you posted before. I love it!