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Cuddle-switch
3/19/22, 10:12 PM
Normally, I'm more into some sci-fi hypno-goodness, but by God, finding this modern-day realism sprinkled in amongst the fantastical made my day. Roman's slow growth through the story, and his gradual awakening was sweet and sexy. At first, I straight up didn't like him, but it didn't take me long to start rooting for him. I loved to see him second-guessing himself as he began to understand. And the hypnosis itself? Chef's kiss. No notes. This felt real without being drawn out. I saw a lot of similarities to actual hypnosis I've experienced/performed, and that really drew me in. I just wish there was more of this. My mind is already dreaming up scenarios of what it would be like if Quinn took Roman to his limits. I agree with @Ballbustingkid. Much like Roman, I wouldn't mind another round in this universe. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go see about installing stocks into the foot of my bed.

3/20/22, 2:25 AM
@Cuddle-switch Thank you! I very rarely write stories with no fantastical or scifi elements whatsoever, but I also wanted to use my real-life hypnosis experience to make something authentic. I'm so glad it's something you responded to. Roman went through a lot of characterization changes in drafts to try and amp up certain aspects of his personality and alter others entirely. I'm glad that he became a person you could root for even if he still has some work to do (don't we all). Here's hoping the muse'll tell me what these characters get up to next sometime soon!
3/20/22, 1:30 AM
Lovely story, and great execution on the turnaround theme in a non-fucking-over-the-protagonist kind of way. You also did a great job at de-mystifying what actual hypnosis is, so this was sexy, sophisticated, *and* educational! Top marks.

3/20/22, 2:21 AM
@Noam de Pluma Thank you so much! I had really wonderful advice and feedback that helped me bring this story closer to what I hoped it would be! I really wanted to go against the grain of hypnosis/mind control stories always being de facto CNC!
3/19/22, 11:52 AM
I don’t think I can truly tell how much I appreciated and loved this story, quite possibly one of, if not THE best erotic story I have ever read. Having the strong masculine big man be submissive to a small little twink is extremely rare to find, and I really appreciate that you wrote this. But it’s not just that, the set up itself, watching this man be shy and humiliated as well getting aroused by it was so fun to read. My one complaint would that it ended too soon and I wanted to Roman introduced to more things, I wanted to see where he can go pain wise, as well as wanting to see him cum hands free in his pouch there!! Please do not let this be the end, I really hope there is a sequel to this!

3/20/22, 2:20 AM
@Ballbustingkid Thank you so much! It's really encouraging to hear that you enjoyed it so much! My characters are a little unruly -- we'll have to see when Quinn, Roman and Jake next want to come out to play, but I would love to write more with them!
3/19/22, 7:01 PM
amazing story. i would love to find a company offering that kind of products, and i also would t mind a continuation where Master and Toy re-don their human skins and adjust to how this dynamic will impact the rest of their lives.
3/19/22, 1:14 AM
Now this is my kind of BDSM fantasy. Exactly my favorite brand of hypnosis. Delicious size difference. An incredibly caring Dom and a sub eager to experience all sorts of pleasure. I'm a big big big fan of sub tops and Dom bottoms (or just general versatility bc it's the spice of life). And of course, I always love a happy ending. I appreciated was that even while Roman was fully *thinking* his toxic masculinity thoughts, he never really acted on those perceptions in a harmful way. It made it really easy to root for him as a character, and I like how much time you gave for that character growth to occur after that revelation with Quinn. And I want to be sure to really compliment the descriptions of hypnosis. I'm not as deep into the hypno kink as most other readers here, but I'm also no stranger to it. I was hypnotized on stage once in college, and it's a very fond memory of a good time. Little details here and there reminded me of parts of that experience (and fantasies I had afterwards), and *really* got me into the scene. Great job!

3/19/22, 11:29 AM
@Razz TFs Thank you so much! This means a lot, especially coming from someone who writes some of my favourites! Your comment really hits on what I was hoping to accomplish with this story: a completely consensual hypno story that drew on my real-life experiences with hypnosis, with characters who were struggling and deserved compassion over comeuppance! I really appreciate these thoughts!
Anonymous
3/19/22, 8:09 AM
where does it say he enslaved the security guard? did i miss a part? i thought he was just being nice, buying him some food
3/19/22, 7:13 AM
this is getting more and more interesting. The more the control, the hotter this story gets. Slavery and obedience really complements each other. Keep this hot streak going! More toying with the toy!
3/19/22, 5:30 AM
i loved how Jack enslaved all his security guard
Anonymous
3/19/22, 12:05 AM
Damn! What a hot story! Great beginning to what could really be a series! For example, Gulliver could tweak their hormones to have them fulfill certain roles. One guy is forced to build his ass and pecs, and his nipples start lactating. another guy's dick and balls are grown to pornographic proportions. He could even change the hormones so that it deprived the brain of nutrients, to make someone dumber and more subservient!

3/19/22, 12:46 AM
@ I hadn't conceived this as a series, but I absolutely agree that it has all kinds of potential.
3/18/22, 11:40 PM
loved it!