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3/27/22, 11:01 PM
Jack, high on smooth weed and loopy on beer. Fun for everyone
Mar 26, 2022
3/27/22, 6:52 PM
Amazing story man. Great read.
Mar 31, 2019
3/20/22, 2:08 AM
What I think is especially hot about this story is how unrelentingly dominant Tailang is once he gets started. His presence really leaps off the page in a powerful way! Great work with establishing his character! He's a bit of a wildcard at first because of the perspective, and that makes it a joy to discover just how far he'll go.

3/27/22, 4:33 PM
@time.to.occur Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed his character :3
Mar 26, 2022
3/27/22, 2:01 PM
Great to have you back, mcbaer! I also loved this one and thought it would have been perfect for the "Turnabout" contest.
Mar 26, 2022
3/27/22, 11:56 AM
Hope you're doing well! Loved this story!
Mar 26, 2022
3/27/22, 6:02 AM
I'm glad you are posting again.
Mar 26, 2022
3/27/22, 1:38 AM
Glad to see one of your stories on the feed again! Looking forward to what else you have.
3/26/22, 4:05 PM
Nice story, I'm a sucker for straight guys turned gay :)
3/26/22, 12:31 PM
Always anxious for more from the golden pen of Jack Parker.
3/26/22, 5:51 AM
For some reason, the description didn't really appeal to me, so I'm only just reading this story now, and I like it a lot. I will admit, however, that at the end I was waiting for a turnabout twist that never came. I think it wouldn't make sense to have Barry hacking Gulliver's TAG, as nothing in the story indicates he has those abilities, but I personally would have loved an ending where, say, the doctor or the company itself takes control of Gulliver's TAG, reducing him from puppet master to puppet.

3/26/22, 10:44 AM
@Hypnothrill You’re two chapters ahead, but I’m glad you liked it.