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11/14/25, 3:03 PM
Hope there is more.

11/15/25, 2:19 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) Part 2 " The Breaking " is coming in 16th November !

11/20/25, 12:26 PM
@[Hypnoboy-7](/user/show/10055892) A good story with great potential. I'd like to know more about how the other studio members ended up there and began working with the director? Especially about the big Russian? Was he lured in like Drew? Or were other methods used? I'd like to know more about how you'll develop the other studio characters and how they ended up in the story.

11/21/25, 4:28 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) oh no in my mind Russian is a sadistic asshole who enjoys what he is doing . he is getting paid . maybe he run from Russia because he is gay and a shitty person so got trouble in Russia so when he got job offer from director . living in America , breaking straight american marines and get paid for it . of course he liked the idea . we will see him again in story but don't know what I am going to do with him yet . about the other characters , hmmm chapter 4 will be about ramirez and o'malley's back story . I want to bring more characters in , some characters will develop every well while others will be side characters . I don't think I will focus on director body guards .
11/17/25, 5:57 PM
Enjoying every chapter. I always enjoy reading about muscle chunks getting owned. Though if you are interested in furthering their submission and humiliation, how about getting rid of all their body hair and using chastity cages? It's not like they will be using those anymore.

11/21/25, 4:22 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) never played with those ideas , I might try it :D
11/21/25, 3:42 PM
It's a good start and I really enjoy your writing but I'm still disappointed the other series never really got a conclusion. I mean you had just got into transforming the first slut and introduced a piss kink and then the story died with no end chapter. Please continue the last one and then this one.
11/21/25, 5:45 AM
Hope this gets updated, I keep re-reading the story almost every week.
11/21/25, 4:16 AM
Can't wait for more
11/21/25, 3:45 AM
It seems interesting, but I'd like more character development, which unfortunately wasn't the case in the first book. Who is Owen? Who is Y? What are their goals? How did this start? Can anyone with some sense of humor stop them? And why do the characters sometimes behave so stupidly? There are still a lot of questions, but I hope the answers will appear in the next chapters.
Anonymous
11/21/25, 2:00 AM
Great work as always!
11/17/25, 6:44 AM
Wonderful stuff. I've never read such a developed, specific reprogramming of the POV, plus orcs! It's also nice and long, original, edited well... Thanks and know that this is my new favorite by far :) Just curious, how did you develop this story? You just sat down and wrote it, or you knew some aspects that you wanted to include and just made them work together? I write bits but I can never flesh out ideas to this degree.

11/20/25, 8:56 PM
@[speaktothemanagerwithin](/user/show/10066984) I’m very glad you enjoyed the story! Having the development complicated specifically feels nice, because I’ve been working hard on making things flow nicely. As for how I’d develop it, I’d say the latter thing you said is accurate. I have some ideas that I know I’m going to include and I find the most natural progression for them throughout the story.
11/20/25, 8:37 PM
Incredible. Thank you Sir. 😊