I appreciate the author taking the time to write and post the story This last chapter unfortunately descended into a kind of morality play that drained whatever remaining tension and eroticism built up in the earlier chapters (and began to falter mid-way through). With essentially no agency or active role in anything, Brandon being purely a passive victim elicits less sympathy than he really should given his dire circumstances. As for Joe, at first I felt he read as an abusive boyfriend, but towards the end he was just a vessel for the author to pour contempt into and not a character that could be feared and hated as much as the author intended. Rather than being a fearsome sadist or dominant master, Joe relies entirely on the invincible technology of the collar which allows the author to portray him as an oblivious nincompoop while still absolving Brandon of any agency to escape, fight back or defend himself. This absolutely killed the story for me. If a sub is trapped in a horrible situation from which there is no escape, then I as the reader expect the villain holding him to be smart, competent, powerful - something that justifies the situation. Instead this is off-loaded to an inanimate object and the result is deflating to the story. The resolution is unsatisfying and feels unearned. When Brandon was told about "The Resistance" I inwardly groaned because it immediately indicated two possibilities: Either the friend was lying and it was just a set-up to string Brandon along, or it meant that everything was going to be resolved purely through outside forces that appeared suddenly in the penultimate chapter. Both are bad ways to end the story because in the first instance, we've established that Joe is stupid and oblivious so there is no way he could anticipate that Brandon was suicidal, and the second is just the most boring kind of deus ex machina. I don't offer this criticism to slam the author, this is offered in good faith so that future efforts can be improved. The set-up and world-building was promising but the characters needed work. The villain needed to be less of a caricature, the protagonist needed something to do, and the ending was flawed and needed to be re-written.

Nice to have news from Officer Vhanel- I mean Skippy. ;) (I love this story, even if I usually am not a fan of puppies and ABDL. It's not my thing, but it doesn't bother me that much. So I get to enjoy this story.)

I WANT THIS DONE TO MEEEEEEEE

Sweet it's back ^_^

A hot little scene with a sweet and romantic ending.

Excellent choice of artwork for your short story. The same artist had another very similar painting that was sci-fi instead of fantasy but same idea - the slave is strapped onto the larger master like a permanent cocksleeve. It is an obscenely horny thought.

This is my favorite story on here in ages. I would love to see Carter get dominated by Rusty before eventually enlisting Dusty to help turn the tables on Rusty, potentially resulting a happy ending for all (pun definitely intended). Maybe I'm crazy, but I'm kind of shipping Rusty and Carter - they appear to be attracted to each other and seem to have at least a few common interests. The only issue is, of course, that Rusty is a total tool. It feels to me like his biggest problem is his overconfidence, and I feel like his desire to change Carter into a buttslut (against his will or otherwise) is not driven by malice but is just his overconfidence getting in the way of all other considerations (listening to other people's opinions/preferences, not being a jerk, etc.) Maybe Rusty's default stats have his confidence at a 5 - if Carter could turn that down to a reasonable level (and maybe turn up his maturity?) Rusty could potentially end up being an ok dude and partner for Carter.

Amazing

I feel like this story crossed the rubicon from being BDSM to being what I call a "psycho dom" story. Masters who aren't in control of themselves and their emotions aren't really all that sexy. Certainly not at all compared to masters who are methodical, deliberate, who plan and predict and are firmly in control. This master is substantially less sadistic than in some other stories, but because he's like a child in his behavior and sort of retarded when it comes to understanding how his slave is going to react to the things he does, he doesn't come across as a BDSM master just an abusive boyfriend. If that's your intent for the story, that's fine, but as I said it's not very sexy.

Woof , very hot cant wait for next chapter