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3/31/22, 6:43 PM
Oh, Jack. Ev finally knows what love is and how much this Jack wanted him.
Art
3/31/22, 5:54 PM
One of my favorite stories! Are you going to add more chapters after the 17 it already had?
Jack
3/31/22, 5:35 AM
GAH! I didn't expect this at all! I jumped on the site just to see if there was anything new to spark my interest and there's CHAPTER 2 OF ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES OF ALL TIME?!? And it's so fucking good! There's plot, character development, tendrils of a dozen different elements to explore, and just superior writing. I know there wasn't a whole lot of sex stuff in this chapter, but it was clearly such a great addition to the story itself. I can't wait to see how you explore this, and how things develop between Finn, Rada, and Jack. I know I've always wanted Finn and Jack to end up together, but Rada deserves to be happy, as well! It's hard to tell for certain, but life in his dimension doesn't seem all that fun to me. Regardless, the paths you've laid out in this chapter are enticing, and I can't wait for more. Thank you for taking the time to write more of this story, Author. This has really been such a treat!

3/31/22, 6:14 AM
@Jack You were so strongly on Team Finn I was worried that you would not like this chapter since it's Rada focused
3/30/22, 5:35 PM
Great writing. Love the way you have avoided many of the tropes of so many Djin stories. Love the subtle almost subversive relationship dynamics. Overall, this is terrific.

3/31/22, 6:13 AM
@Speedychopslover Thank you. Avoiding the typical genie tropes was actually the driving force of why I started writing this.
3/30/22, 12:26 PM
LOVED the Genie explanation! magic as equals technology is such a fun premise and it's so engagingly depicted for us here. Jack is so cute and sweet i REALLY want him to use at least ONE MORE WISH, and REALLY DO NOT WANT him to use any other wishes. Rada is an amazing Genie, the most uniquely done I've seen. Bravo! a superb installment and continuation to a superb story.

3/31/22, 6:06 AM
@Mind Labyrinth so what do you want him to do with his second wish?
3/30/22, 2:34 PM
Finally read this—it’s so hot! I love how Finn dominates Jack, and the genie wish is so clever; the world is compelling and immersive. I feel like I’m in it. Your writing is always so fun.

3/31/22, 4:35 AM
@Soren Fitz Oh thank you! I think fun is a good way to describe this one!
Mar 29, 2022
Mitch_CoRob
3/31/22, 3:32 AM
So hot. Thank you for sharing! Loved this story and I hope you continue to write.
Mar 26, 2022
3/30/22, 6:46 PM
Great to see you posting again! A very hot story.
Mar 26, 2022
suitedsubmissive
3/30/22, 6:27 PM
Excellent story, Sir!
Mar 29, 2022
3/30/22, 1:06 PM
I really loved this story and I hope for a sequel!