Recent Comments

Evan
4/1/22, 1:12 AM
LOVED this. What a cool universe, and a link to the infamous Edgers. Slut-smoke sounds like fun. Rookie seems like he's earned himself a spot on the team with his mentor. Great writing. Hot too, loved the stoner's lack of control over himself and wanting all the good feelings.

4/1/22, 2:49 PM
@Evan than you so much, I’m really glad you enjoyed. Me and my friend worked on the idea together and I feel like I had no choice but to turn this cool, kinky idea into a story
Anonymous
4/1/22, 11:29 AM
This might actually be the best you’ve written yet. Jack and Ev are so amazing.
3/31/22, 4:48 PM
Hot Good ending hope the coach makes him part of the staff so he will spend the rest of his life serving him and every generation of Dirty stinking Jocks the coach turns the team into Also hope for the next part of your other story

3/31/22, 11:23 PM
@GermanSeed thank you, glad you like :)
3/31/22, 12:09 AM
Incredible

3/31/22, 11:22 PM
@GiveInToTheMusk thank you!
3/30/22, 10:08 PM
I'm so looking forward to him losing his will completely. This was hot af

3/31/22, 11:22 PM
@Rroot thank you! Glad you like it :)
3/31/22, 7:13 PM
This has been a thrill to read. I always enjoy small top/big bottom stories. Joe should definitely get Jack to show off that body more. Perhaps get him to wear gear on a more regular basis; even under his suit in public. Please keep the story going.
3/31/22, 6:43 PM
Oh, Jack. Ev finally knows what love is and how much this Jack wanted him.
Art
3/31/22, 5:54 PM
One of my favorite stories! Are you going to add more chapters after the 17 it already had?
Jack
3/31/22, 5:35 AM
GAH! I didn't expect this at all! I jumped on the site just to see if there was anything new to spark my interest and there's CHAPTER 2 OF ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES OF ALL TIME?!? And it's so fucking good! There's plot, character development, tendrils of a dozen different elements to explore, and just superior writing. I know there wasn't a whole lot of sex stuff in this chapter, but it was clearly such a great addition to the story itself. I can't wait to see how you explore this, and how things develop between Finn, Rada, and Jack. I know I've always wanted Finn and Jack to end up together, but Rada deserves to be happy, as well! It's hard to tell for certain, but life in his dimension doesn't seem all that fun to me. Regardless, the paths you've laid out in this chapter are enticing, and I can't wait for more. Thank you for taking the time to write more of this story, Author. This has really been such a treat!

3/31/22, 6:14 AM
@Jack You were so strongly on Team Finn I was worried that you would not like this chapter since it's Rada focused
3/30/22, 5:35 PM
Great writing. Love the way you have avoided many of the tropes of so many Djin stories. Love the subtle almost subversive relationship dynamics. Overall, this is terrific.

3/31/22, 6:13 AM
@Speedychopslover Thank you. Avoiding the typical genie tropes was actually the driving force of why I started writing this.