Recent Comments

3/31/22, 6:22 PM
So hot. How do we contact for a possible story commission?

3/31/22, 11:24 PM
@Sinatraguy74 thank you! You can private message me on here regarding any commission requests :)

4/3/22, 8:24 PM
@FKH19 sadly I have no cash but year your stuff is great but forced family bonding is continuing to i hope
4/3/22, 5:02 PM
Love the set up to this story. You did really well with your first shot at this, and I think with more practice you could write something great. I wanted to like this story but there was little focus on the transformations and I had a hard time imagining it. I love when a story sucks you in and lets you believe you are part of it. I think you have the potential to do just that.
4/3/22, 12:59 PM
You could take a bit more time to tell the story, but it‘s hot, and I like it. Stories about jocks and bros are the best. <3
Evan
4/3/22, 11:11 AM
Damn. What an ending to this chapter! So hot, electric. Great turn around, consequences, and fun. And a little bit of shame to go with it.
Evan
4/3/22, 10:05 AM
This is my favourite chapter. It has elements of their new dynamic but also really sweet and a bit romantic.
4/2/22, 10:29 PM
I love when a jock gets turned into a little slut. Great story.
Jerry
4/2/22, 6:25 PM
Very nice.
4/2/22, 6:58 AM
Very hot. thank you for sharing your story. Look forward to the chapter!
3/30/22, 2:50 PM
This is such a fun world! You’ve really fleshed out the characters, and now they have motivations, plans of action, ideas… they feel real, and this world feels full of possibility. I’m excited to see more.

4/2/22, 5:06 AM
@Soren Fitz Thank you! I have some fun angles to this world I have yet to reveal as well!
Anonymous
4/1/22, 7:13 PM
Don't particularly care about the preachy crypto bullshit but I'm glad this story is being continued

4/2/22, 5:05 AM
Oh, well, thanks for letting me know you felt the crypto explanation came across as preachy! I just thought I needed to explain how the CPU power necessary (and therefore, energy consumption) had increased so drastically that while Jack was able to mine bitcoin years ago, now he'd need to lease a server farm. The Djinn were commenting on it overly harshly because they know of something better that works for them up in their higher dimension. The Djinn do not necessarily get everything right.