Recent Comments

Jerry
4/2/22, 6:25 PM
Very nice.
4/2/22, 6:58 AM
Very hot. thank you for sharing your story. Look forward to the chapter!
3/30/22, 2:50 PM
This is such a fun world! You’ve really fleshed out the characters, and now they have motivations, plans of action, ideas… they feel real, and this world feels full of possibility. I’m excited to see more.

4/2/22, 5:06 AM
@Soren Fitz Thank you! I have some fun angles to this world I have yet to reveal as well!
Anonymous
4/1/22, 7:13 PM
Don't particularly care about the preachy crypto bullshit but I'm glad this story is being continued

4/2/22, 5:05 AM
Oh, well, thanks for letting me know you felt the crypto explanation came across as preachy! I just thought I needed to explain how the CPU power necessary (and therefore, energy consumption) had increased so drastically that while Jack was able to mine bitcoin years ago, now he'd need to lease a server farm. The Djinn were commenting on it overly harshly because they know of something better that works for them up in their higher dimension. The Djinn do not necessarily get everything right.
2/10/22, 8:43 PM
WOW! What a great chapter. I love how they fought for dominance and the tables were turned. Is there a chance for a third chapter??? The story feels complete and at the same time there is a lot of room for more chapters if you like.

2/10/22, 9:29 PM
@BrzNLA .... I'm going to admit: there will be a third chapter. You have @Hypnothrill to thank for that. I had absolutely no intention in writing a third chapter. I had planned an epilogue. But after reader an early draft of Chapter 2, @Hypnothrill gave me reason to expand the epilogue into a full chapter. It won't be anything you guys are expecting. I don't want to say more. I would rather let the chapter surprise and speak for itself. It may take me a week before it's posted because as I said, I never planned to write it. And now I have to find time to crank the finale out.

4/2/22, 1:26 AM
@rubbrsome I can't wait for your next chapter! This is probably one of your best works honestly.
DannyStorm
4/1/22, 10:05 PM
Soooo hot, I do hope those high-school boys get to have some fun with the college studs again tho.
Evan
4/1/22, 1:12 AM
LOVED this. What a cool universe, and a link to the infamous Edgers. Slut-smoke sounds like fun. Rookie seems like he's earned himself a spot on the team with his mentor. Great writing. Hot too, loved the stoner's lack of control over himself and wanting all the good feelings.

4/1/22, 2:49 PM
@Evan than you so much, I’m really glad you enjoyed. Me and my friend worked on the idea together and I feel like I had no choice but to turn this cool, kinky idea into a story
Anonymous
4/1/22, 11:29 AM
This might actually be the best you’ve written yet. Jack and Ev are so amazing.
3/31/22, 4:48 PM
Hot Good ending hope the coach makes him part of the staff so he will spend the rest of his life serving him and every generation of Dirty stinking Jocks the coach turns the team into Also hope for the next part of your other story

3/31/22, 11:23 PM
@GermanSeed thank you, glad you like :)
3/31/22, 12:09 AM
Incredible

3/31/22, 11:22 PM
@GiveInToTheMusk thank you!