Recent Comments

4/5/22, 9:21 PM
I loved this story.
Feb 17, 2022
HornedUpAsian
4/5/22, 6:34 PM
So hot. Had a bi married guy who was into eating ass … moved away :(. How about a “how it began” story?
4/5/22, 4:30 PM
So hot!! 🔥😍
Evan
4/5/22, 2:12 AM
Another great series and chapter. After the trust and affection of last chapter, they get some payoff for themselves and continue to expose and fill Ev's needs. Looks like those daddy issues are coming to the surface.
Jay
4/4/22, 11:33 PM
So fucking hot....
4/4/22, 8:37 PM
Oh, Jack, Ev is exposed to the whole county!
Evan
4/4/22, 11:42 AM
What a treat this was. Caring, consensual, explorative. A lovely story of acceptance with fun BDSM and hypno elements to enjoy. Loved it.

4/4/22, 4:33 PM
@Evan Thank you for taking the time to say so! <3 I really appreciate that you read and enjoyed it -- I'm grateful to share space with you.
Muscle-Flex
3/20/22, 11:42 PM
Wow, you really knocked it out of the ballpark with this chapter. The description of the scenes and the dialogue are hot, as is Markus’s internal monologue and his cluelessness. I don’t think you need any suggestions – you’ve got a great imagination!

Rubber_Lover14
4/4/22, 2:45 AM
@Muscle-Flex Thank you so much for your comment ^^ I'll make sure to try and make the next chapter interesting. I've been toying with the idea of making the hypnosis more obvious. I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter when it's out (whenever that may be)
Anonymous
4/4/22, 2:39 AM
The story is hot. Really hot. Moved a little fast, but that's okay. You'll learn. Advice: run the spell and grammar check after you've finished writing. Writing is not the hard part. Believe it or not: it's the editing. Editing takes time. You'll know the difference when you read the better writers on this blog. If you're using MSWord, it's real simple. Keep writing. And write what makes you enjoy the creative side of you.
Martin
4/3/22, 8:36 PM
Best and most realistic hypno story ever! I see myself in Roman, at least partly. I never had problems bottoming, and I strife to be able to relent control... and I'm not nearly as dominant as him. But other than that...

4/4/22, 12:42 AM
@Martin I'm glad you could see something of yourself in Roman! I wanted him to be a relatable guy who also happened to have some hangups about the things he wants deep down! It's awesome to hear how much you enjoyed the story, too. Thanks for this kind comment.