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4/7/22, 9:56 PM
Oh, Ev is getting all he needs, but does he want more?

4/7/22, 9:58 PM
@mjkuhl everyone always wants more.
Anonymous
4/7/22, 5:31 PM
that was one of the hottest stories I’ve read… from the growth concept to the power play to the sex… brilliant story… I totally get that it was intended as a one off… but as noted sooo much potential for much more!!! I wonder if scrubs needs to save Barry or take over all control…

4/7/22, 9:35 PM
We are all so wired to expect an ending where the bad guy is brought to justice -- often against impossible odds -- that when it doesn't happen, there's a strange sort of disappointment. In a mind control or subjugation story, especially an erotic story, we should expect the bad guy to win.
4/6/22, 4:04 PM
A classic absman "power at a price" story- I can think of few other authors who so deftly wed the fantasy of easy physical perfection with loss of autonomy and even personal identity, to the point that at this point, I kind of expect the guy to get mentally enslaved by the end.

4/7/22, 9:32 PM
@ParadoxBear That would help in my effort to use fewer words! On the other hand, imagine I wrote a story with lots of muscle growth and a happy ending -- people wouldn't know what to do!
Anthony D. Langford
4/7/22, 8:45 AM
Interesting start
4/7/22, 6:23 AM
Would be great to read about some slaming in rubber
3/30/22, 2:35 PM
Wow! What an awesome direction to take this. The world building is excellent. I love how the genies work, and finding out that much about them. I love the warnings about how Rada is doing things, and the hint that he might fall in love with Jack. Can’t wait for more!

4/7/22, 2:13 AM
@MonsterMash62 Thank you so much! I was honestly a little bit worried that I was doing too much lore building but I thought the idea was really really interesting. I mean who hasn't wanted to romance Dorian etc al., in Dragon Age Inquisition and have more than one sex scene right?
4/6/22, 9:34 PM
This is … simply delightful! So well-written, extremely sexy without coming across as just straight-up porn, and a very interesting exploration of concepts. As to the question above about the second wish.. Jack is pretty self-effacing and enjoys being submissive/agreeable/accepting... what if he were to work out a deal with Rada to wish to make of himself a better/superconductor partner/client/host in exchange for the genie's goodwill and sticking around longer? Or perhaps wingmanning/Cyrano-ing him with Finn, not realizing he's already got his hooks in him? Risk and slippery slope for Rada, in what seems an innocent and harmless diversion.

4/7/22, 12:40 AM
@wmmoller Well thank you! This is a particularly fun and nice comment to get. By the way when I was asking about the second wish I just was curious what the other commenter had in mind since she didn't specify. I actually do know what I'm doing with that if Jack should _happen_ to ever make another wish...
4/7/22, 12:35 AM
Thank you for writing more of this! I'm hoping there's more? Maybe Harry's obsession looses a Quidditch game on purpose and Draco gets to claim his reward...
4/6/22, 3:10 AM
What a sweet, hot story! I loved this.

4/6/22, 10:02 PM
@Noam de Pluma I trade in sweet and hot! I'm glad you enjoyed.
Ome
4/6/22, 5:13 PM
I retract? My hurtful comments??? I'm ready to change if you're ready to forgive hahaha my bad my bad fuck haha

4/6/22, 5:15 PM
@Ome All good. As penance go read ‘domination of a silver age superboy’ (that’s one of my commissions too 🤣)