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Muscle-Flex
4/11/22, 12:14 AM
Whew! This chapter was the best one yet. I can tell you had fun with it. The way you describe the scene, lots of hot details, and the interaction between Markus and Doc Adam, was excellent. I love how Markus keeps going deeper and deeper into a trap and suspects that maybe something is wrong, but it’s all just so confusing… and stimulating! The way Doc Adam is slowly and carefully training him – the musky pheromones, the itchy lube, pleasurable stretching of his hole, the cunning development of his nipples, turning them into control buttons basically, the leather bondage that Markus can’t help flexing against with his big muscles, and, of course, the throbbing and dripping, not to mention the Doc’s whispered words in his ears (that pesky sound of waves, ha ha ha)… the buff jock will soon find his own body working against him. Next time he is on the internet, he better look up “muscle slave” because that’s his destiny, whether he wants it or not (if he can still read)! Heh heh. I guess the Doctor was in the market for a big macho stud boy he could make his own. Did Markus’s coach send him to Doc Adam knowing what was going to happen? Is he in on it? Or is he clueless? As for the other guys, I’d go with Sam since he seems to have a bit of a smart-mouth rivalry with Marcus. Opportunities for Sam humiliating Markus before he himself gets put on the slippery slide to a life of lifting and service. I wonder if Darrah might be more on the side of the doctor (if he knew what was going on)? He seems the type that might relish being able to exercise control over Markus. And then there is the Coach. Maybe he will start to wonder what is going on with his star player? A little investigation might be in order. No doubt Coach, used to having his orders followed, can't imagine anyone getting the best of him. But if his curiosity about the doctor peaks while he's at the gym and he decides to have a snoop around the doctor's office late at night without bothering to change out of his sweaty gear, he may find himself more vulnerable than he thinks! Can’t wait for Part 4.

Rubber_Lover14
4/11/22, 12:47 AM
@Muscle-Flex Thank you so much for such a detailed comment. It really was fun righting this one. I wont spoil anything, but it would be fun to involve the coach or Darrah. Personally, i'm up in the air on who to involve. But i will involve someone. Maybe they work with the doctor, or fight with him over control of Mark, either way, its going to be kinky. Who knows what will happen to our group of sexy, sweaty, meat headed jocks. I dont evem know XD. These are mainly written on whims. Either way, thanks for the feedback. I cant wait to start writing the next part.
4/10/22, 9:52 PM
Die Story wird spannend... gut geschrieben und da kann noch so allerhand passieren.. freu mich auf weitere folgen.
4/9/22, 2:04 AM
The scene with Jonathan (spotting while weightlifting) was hot, but it didn't feel like you described him much, so tough to say. Sam's description was definitely my favorite of the three, just the right body type.

Rubber_Lover14
4/10/22, 1:34 AM
@amul Thanks for the comment. Ill try to describe them better in future. Side note, I've updated the post to include images of all the characters. I'm note sure if you can see it yet, but that might help in decision making in the future.

4/10/22, 4:53 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 I can see the photos! Changing my vote to the Coach. :sweat_smile:

Rubber_Lover14
4/10/22, 5:33 PM
@amul Off. Well, that's one vote for the coach and 2 for Johnathan. Thanks for letting me know of the change in your vote ^^
Anonymous
4/10/22, 4:46 AM
Jesus Fuck! Thank you! :heart_eyes:

4/10/22, 11:14 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it! This was a lot of fun to write!
4/10/22, 8:32 AM
amazing!!!
Evan
4/10/22, 8:02 AM
This was an insanely hot roleplay between the three. The messing with Ev's mind is part of the fun. He's super into it in general and then the roleplay layer on top (that becomes reality for him). So amazing. I love your work.
SklaveTimm
4/10/22, 5:09 AM
Whow, what a hot Story. My Dick is leaking in his cage.
Xavi
4/3/22, 2:29 AM
All I can say is wow. Hope to see more of him in his teammate's musky clothes, especially a well soiled pair of tighty whities.

4/3/22, 8:27 PM
@Xavi yeah hope he becomes the filthiest musky jock ever and then stays as to coach co-coach helping the coach turn the coming generation into the coach musky jock boys. So he can spend the rest of his love feasting on jock filth and stick and serve his coach! What better way to support the team and the man he owes all the stuff he learned how important humility and team spirit are!

Xavi
4/10/22, 4:47 AM
@GermanSeed There are so many possibilities for our dear star athlete. I would love for him to be a celebrated professional baseball player who becomes the team's plaything after every game. Would also like him to be unable to own clothing ever again and beg musky men for the clothing off their back. I may be dragging on here but I imagine some scene where he's in clean clothes but he starts feeling itchy all over which stops when he strips naked and then begs the clothes off of a group of men who oblige for a price.
Anonymous
4/10/22, 4:01 AM
Thank ya Jesus!
Anonymous
4/10/22, 3:23 AM
So hot!! I'm hard as rocks!!!!!!