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6/5/22, 4:16 PM
Thanks for the comments, everybody! I'm drowning in WIPs at the moment, but the next chapter will likely be out next weekend.
5/28/22, 2:01 AM
I'm torn. I could see all three options being fascinating. I think I'm leaning toward getting Dusty to help, because I don't believe for a minute that Rusty can actually handle multiple subs. For the record, I'm really enjoying this story, and the way you've made it a sort of choose-your-own-adventure type thing. And you have such skill as a writer to get most people to absolutely despise Rusty in one story. And Dusty is a fascinating version of what Rusty could be if he'd be a little less, well, Rusty. I'm confused about Rusty saying that Dusty's dominance is so much lower than his new submissiveness. It doesn't seem that much lower, but I don't know how the mechanics work that well in this RPG, so I think Rusty might be overstating things. I'm curious what Carter's dominance score was before, too. I also look forward to seeing what other attributes get added to both of them and/or if any other new characters will be created. And lastly, I don't know how you're keeping all these stories in flight. I look forward to the continuations of the other ones you have going when you have time.

6/5/22, 4:12 PM
@Proteus Thanks! And you're on the nose with the observation that Rusty's exaggerating the difference between Dusty's dominance/sub scores.
6/4/22, 2:09 PM
Very well written and I love where the story is going. I’m rooting for Brandon!bv

6/4/22, 2:45 PM
@SlaveBoyJG Thank you very much. It's really nice to have some feedback!
6/3/22, 5:34 PM
Hot! Look forward to part 2. Hope one of them ends up a big strongman in a tight singlet or tights with no hair, just big gleaming smooth muscles!
6/3/22, 6:00 AM
It was sort of difficult to follow the size proportions of this transformation, but the premise was totally good!
6/2/22, 11:15 PM
Great story but I swear have read it somewhere before.
6/2/22, 10:08 PM
Anxiously awaiting the next part!
6/1/22, 8:13 AM
Try to fight it Damn this is hot
5/31/22, 5:48 PM
I have read this twice and it gets better each time. As i eead, im thinking of guys i know who fit Ev's situation and what they could be doing when not "playing" straight. i do wish there was more cause the potential possibilities are endless. Love it!
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5/31/22, 9:37 AM
Either try to fight him or get Dusty to help! I hate it when the asshole villain gets his way and Carter did nothing wrong. I'm all up for Carter learning to love bottoming, but that needs to be with Dusty who seems like a kind person. I also hope Rusty won't be able to lower Carter's intelligence. Firstly because he doesn't deserves this and secondly because a battle of wits seems more interesting.