Oh, Jack. He is settled into a kind of routine. I hope nothing upsets that routine.

Jonathan sounds quite hot, and I'd love to find out what socks he wears and how they smell!

Great ending to your story.! A new Ck is born [Charlie's Kink Factory]

@tankonpoint Tysm man! Would love to hear your thoughts on the other stories of you do get a chance to read them! I had a lot of fun getting weird and creative with this series.

I enjoyed this kinky reimagining of C&TCF. It, and The Glass Elevator, are among my favourite books. I like your use of magical or mysterious devices and Charlie's revenge on Trevor. i like your writing. I have read one other story you wrote and may read the rest while I'm at it! Thank you!

Might there be a future as bottom boy and cum dump for the team?

This was such a delightful romp. The contrast between perspectives is so incredible. There's a callousness to Coins and a frivolousness that the rest of society would see so it makes perfect sense. But how fascinating to see the assumed intentions and confirmation bias. Nova sees the party as domineering, degrading, and solely about ownership and sex for their own pleasure. But the reality was about friendliness, bonding, and welcoming and giving Jasper pleasure as well. Exactly the same acts and setup but two different views of it based on the cultures and social situations. This sort of thing is so realistic, and really highlights there is a culture underlying all of this and not just a flimsy excuse for an orgy (not that there's anything wrong with that, but this makes it a part of the world). I was really invested in Callix and Rhys reconciling and the understandable scuffle with Jasper made my stomach drop. Very well played. Not a smooth ride but they did get to talk after when everyone was cooler-headed. Some great dynamics here, too. The various ways favours were granted allowing for everyone at the party to enjoy it. I also really enjoy the casual and natural way sex is understood for Coins. Literally getting a blowjob while having a conversation to calm down from a disagreement. Freely enjoying one another in plain sight of everyone else and it being entirely unremarkable. Incorporating the maze to allow for hiding and favours is such a neat game. And making it a copy of the streets to give Jasper the advantage was pure genius. Both from Aris and Rhys's point of view and also as writers. What a cool element. And he really showed them he was cunning and if they caught him for a favour it was because the god Aphrodite wanted to extend such generosity. Quite a lot of dynamics being played with in this chapter. Including Jasper being a top and even a dom on occasion. He's a versatile little switch. And it seems like Rhys is pleased by this also. So much good stuff, I don't want to go on too long. See you next chapter.

Whew! This chapter was the best one yet. I can tell you had fun with it. The way you describe the scene, lots of hot details, and the interaction between Markus and Doc Adam, was excellent. I love how Markus keeps going deeper and deeper into a trap and suspects that maybe something is wrong, but it’s all just so confusing… and stimulating! The way Doc Adam is slowly and carefully training him – the musky pheromones, the itchy lube, pleasurable stretching of his hole, the cunning development of his nipples, turning them into control buttons basically, the leather bondage that Markus can’t help flexing against with his big muscles, and, of course, the throbbing and dripping, not to mention the Doc’s whispered words in his ears (that pesky sound of waves, ha ha ha)… the buff jock will soon find his own body working against him. Next time he is on the internet, he better look up “muscle slave” because that’s his destiny, whether he wants it or not (if he can still read)! Heh heh. I guess the Doctor was in the market for a big macho stud boy he could make his own. Did Markus’s coach send him to Doc Adam knowing what was going to happen? Is he in on it? Or is he clueless? As for the other guys, I’d go with Sam since he seems to have a bit of a smart-mouth rivalry with Marcus. Opportunities for Sam humiliating Markus before he himself gets put on the slippery slide to a life of lifting and service. I wonder if Darrah might be more on the side of the doctor (if he knew what was going on)? He seems the type that might relish being able to exercise control over Markus. And then there is the Coach. Maybe he will start to wonder what is going on with his star player? A little investigation might be in order. No doubt Coach, used to having his orders followed, can't imagine anyone getting the best of him. But if his curiosity about the doctor peaks while he's at the gym and he decides to have a snoop around the doctor's office late at night without bothering to change out of his sweaty gear, he may find himself more vulnerable than he thinks! Can’t wait for Part 4.

Die Story wird spannend... gut geschrieben und da kann noch so allerhand passieren.. freu mich auf weitere folgen.

The scene with Jonathan (spotting while weightlifting) was hot, but it didn't feel like you described him much, so tough to say. Sam's description was definitely my favorite of the three, just the right body type.