You know I love it when characters don't have names, but titles instead. Give me a story full of Officers and Fresh Meat any day of the week. Loved this!

Such an amazing continuation of this story! I think it's even hotter than the first two chapters.

As always, your work made my cocklet bust its nut, Sir! Glad to see Wes is back writing!!

Oh, Jack. He is settled into a kind of routine. I hope nothing upsets that routine.

Jonathan sounds quite hot, and I'd love to find out what socks he wears and how they smell!

Great ending to your story.! A new Ck is born [Charlie's Kink Factory]

@tankonpoint Tysm man! Would love to hear your thoughts on the other stories of you do get a chance to read them! I had a lot of fun getting weird and creative with this series.

I enjoyed this kinky reimagining of C&TCF. It, and The Glass Elevator, are among my favourite books. I like your use of magical or mysterious devices and Charlie's revenge on Trevor. i like your writing. I have read one other story you wrote and may read the rest while I'm at it! Thank you!

Might there be a future as bottom boy and cum dump for the team?

This was such a delightful romp. The contrast between perspectives is so incredible. There's a callousness to Coins and a frivolousness that the rest of society would see so it makes perfect sense. But how fascinating to see the assumed intentions and confirmation bias. Nova sees the party as domineering, degrading, and solely about ownership and sex for their own pleasure. But the reality was about friendliness, bonding, and welcoming and giving Jasper pleasure as well. Exactly the same acts and setup but two different views of it based on the cultures and social situations. This sort of thing is so realistic, and really highlights there is a culture underlying all of this and not just a flimsy excuse for an orgy (not that there's anything wrong with that, but this makes it a part of the world). I was really invested in Callix and Rhys reconciling and the understandable scuffle with Jasper made my stomach drop. Very well played. Not a smooth ride but they did get to talk after when everyone was cooler-headed. Some great dynamics here, too. The various ways favours were granted allowing for everyone at the party to enjoy it. I also really enjoy the casual and natural way sex is understood for Coins. Literally getting a blowjob while having a conversation to calm down from a disagreement. Freely enjoying one another in plain sight of everyone else and it being entirely unremarkable. Incorporating the maze to allow for hiding and favours is such a neat game. And making it a copy of the streets to give Jasper the advantage was pure genius. Both from Aris and Rhys's point of view and also as writers. What a cool element. And he really showed them he was cunning and if they caught him for a favour it was because the god Aphrodite wanted to extend such generosity. Quite a lot of dynamics being played with in this chapter. Including Jasper being a top and even a dom on occasion. He's a versatile little switch. And it seems like Rhys is pleased by this also. So much good stuff, I don't want to go on too long. See you next chapter.