My favorite one so far in the series. And the "briefs" action really did it for me, so hot!

Better then it it was all those years ago! I hope you write new stories!!

Improved and changed in the best of ways. But I'll never think of it again isn't possible for poor Joaquin. He will do a lot of thinking and acting.

Wie gesagt saugeile Story, nach nochmaligen lesen muss ich est mal mich abreagieren und warte schon sehnsüchtig auf die Fortsetzung Und das es sie jetzt hier gibt und nicht nur bei (men on the net) zu finden ist

Damn that was hot! Please keep going! He has his own rubber slave now, I look forward to what else he will do.

Timm, das ist wirklich richtig geil. Ich bin beim Lesen sofort hart geworden. Du musst aber an Deiner Formattierung arbeiten. Ich hab mal eine ganze Menge neuer Absätze am Ende eingefügt, sonst ist das nur ein Wall of Text. Irgendwie hast Du Dich derart in Deine geile erste Sklavenerfahrung reingesteigert (und das echt toll und super heiß beschrieben), dass Du das Absatz machen total vergessen hast. Außerdem passen Deine Stories allesamt besser nach GayCollar, und dort unter die Kategorie "Total Power Exchange". Ich erlaube mir das mal dort hin zu packen, ist das ok für Dich? Ach ja, BITTE schreib weiter! Der Anfang verspricht echt sehr viel!

Geil geil geil!

Loving the weight gain, humiliation, and mind break.

LOVE TO LIVE IT

Whoa. So much happened in this chapter. Rhys's surprise and genuine horror at the reality of the Argent was really well communicated. I think it confirmed to Jasper and readers just how out of touch the sky dwellers are. For all their keen eyesight, distance from the issue warps perspective. I loved that a lot of the pollution and rubbish was mistaken for something more beautiful from high above. Coins moulding their world and seeing what they want. Glass bottles reflecting light interpreted as wet, glistening rocks. That was very well done. Both as imagery and as a commentary on the Coins and slum disconnect. Jasper's time with the Coins has felt a little dream-like. Fantasy heightened, unreal. They live in that sort of world and this brought them both very literally back to Earth. Firstly, I loved the approach to showing Coins aren't invulnerable, and can actually be quite stupid with their day-to-day being so secure and their privilege giving them that false sense of total control over life. Going down there without security was pretty arrogant and foolish. Glad it didn't end badly and hopefully they learn from that. Jasper coming into his own, using his instincts and taking charge and yet still managing to stay in a respectful pet boundary was masterfully done and even applauded by Rhys. I love that Rhys got to see this very different side of Jasper, in his old element and really reinforcing what they'd just talked about with the incident with Callix. If Rhys hadn't already accepted his explanation and taken that perspective into account, I think this may have opened him more to it. The scene escaping the Coin-hunting slum denizens was very tense. I was genuinely afraid for Rhys and Jasper. I liked Iskios and his more cavalier attitude to the Coin present. Very believable that his interest laid more in having a competitor confirmed out of the game and not all that adversarial once confirmed. A little teasing that he was a pet now but what does he care if he gets more patch to play with. And all of this, with all it is already accomplishing for character and bonding our two favourite owner/pet combo, it also moves the main intrigue and plot along with Rhys gaining a lead or two to find out just how much he doesn't know about Jasper. I'm very curious what he does with that information. And how he feels about it. He's not stupid (if you don't count unescorted slumming) so he was pretty sure Jasper's criminal history was more than just a little theft here and there. His ability to access the secure lab was enough to tip him off to that. But having it confirmed is another matter. And will Iskios' witness to Jasper's behaviour get back to Seth, Nova, and Julian? How will they see it. Everyone has their own view of things and it taints every interaction, will they be able to interpret anything Iskios said as further proof of coercion or will the chance to escape on home turf put a spanner in their thoughts. Surely he didn't take the opportunity just because he's not finished his con yet and this earns more trust and freedom... So, so many layers in this world, with these characters, and your writing. It's impressive and a delight to read and immerse myself in. And that's before we even talk about the incredibly hot sex going on. Definitely exposed a new kink for me with all of Jasper and Rhys's talk about exposure of him being fucked like the slut he is in the automated vehicle flying up to home. And how eagerly Jasper engages in pleasing Rhys's body. Obedience to the point of almost entrancing himself thanks to his conditioning. And reaching climax with the combination of his owner inside him and being seen being a wanton slutty pet from the outside. I am curious where things will go once Rhys talks to Jasper about hypnosis. It's a very easy road. And, of course, once they talk about it and he puts him under on purpose the trail to Aris's programming gets obscured that little bit more. Their tenderness and passion is wonderful to see. And hot, of course. Like Rhys, I also LOVE how much precum our little pet produces. Going to finish off by thanking you both again for writing such an amazing story together. And you have a huge fan eagerly anticipating more chapters when time allows.