Rhys noticing the ease with which hypnosis works on his pet. Interesting. Rhys also noting the almost proforma responses in trance also interesting. Is there suspicion there? Does he think (or just make himself think) it's just evidence that this is really what Jasper wants deep down and he's putting up conscious blocks normally. "Maybe Jasper meditates". I think Jasper really does want this. He cares for Rhys and chances are that even without Aris's meddling he'd have been a great pet. The problem is, any response he gives can't be trusted to be only his own now. The manipulation has the potential to cause a rift between Jasper and Rhys, Rhys and Aris, the twins and Rhys - again, the twins and Aris - possibly, not that we've seen much interplay between them. The subtelty of the dominance shift with the cleaning was really well done. And Rhys identifying it and taking back the control in the form of the washcloth was really interesting to see and that washcloth was very symbolic. On one hand it could have been just romantic, washing one another after enjoying themselves, but the tone had already been set and needed to be nipped in the bud from Rhys's point of view. Especially given Jasper's wild nature to start with. Having said that, seeing Rhys lose control in spite of knowing the game Jasper was playing was very,very hot. And I think a great demonstration of a more innocuous "weakness" prescribed on him by the Zeus condition. He could have stopped, reasserted control completely before cumming to put a very firm deliniation between Jasper's coaxing to cum for him and the event itself. But, given the risk of Zeus, he felt it better (or couldn't not) let it slide. Something I hadn't commented on earlier but wanted to highlight was another aspect of the Coin culture and their status (because there's so much to praise). The cultural taboo of masturbating as a Coin in public - as we saw when Aris was with Rhys in the training VR room when we first saw the Zeus syndrome - it's not that masturbation is wrong or that anyone is a prude (certainly not with pets blowing you at a moment's notice) it just seems like the culture is that someone of a Coin's status should have someone else doing it for them if they need release. At least in the presence of other Coins. I'm looking at it a lot like a Coin making their own food at this point. They have a trusted butler (and presumably cook/chef) to help with that. Doing it themselves would be a real low point of desperation of starvation. Perhaps a flawed analogy. Then sex later when Jasper was rested. And he is letting himself be vulnerable and free. No trance this time, no doubt that Aris's conditioning is still in play below the surface somewhere but in reminiscing about his old friends he tells himself they were just allies of convenience and that they would have written him off. Yet they are seeking to rescue him and believe him to be controlled. The real question is how much of Jasper is into being a pet. We have an element of his old life and new life combining. Nova saw him as the wanton Aphrodite, cutting loose and enjoying the safety and freedom he has acquired through Rhys. What would Jasper think of that, I wonder. He clearly has an exhibitionist streak but what of humiliation. Is he proud of what a good pet he is? And his interpretation of Aris's rules to allow him to be more of himself to please Rhys rather than a simpering cloying pet with no personality was genius. Jasper is far more interesting with at least part of himself intact and it raises that more ambiguous question of how much is him and how much is the programming? Speaking of programming. The twins are quite a pair. I really liked that they didn't immediately villainise Rhys but instead interpreted his snubbing of an almost invulnerable Coin to focus on his hurt normal, human pet as proof he cares and is trying to look after Jasper. And perhaps a sign of his growth over the last decade. But then comes the rumour. That Jasper has turned around from rebellious slummer to perfect pet a little too quickly. The fact the two of them are taking Rhys's history into account and thinking perhaps he is responsible for Jasper's sudden change in behaviour (rather than Aris) is perfect. It's believable and, given their last experience of Rhys 10 years ago, entirely realistic conclusion to concern themselves with. And the twins themselves not being the same character is notable too. They have their own personalities, they tease one another. Calix's imagining of the conversation was very different to the reality with very little sympathy and a rather practical assessment of the situation. The way you are both weaving the thread of rumour, "evidence" and perspective is magnifient. Aris's interference, Jasper's inner desires (one presumes), Rhys's desire for someone to cherish, care for, and serve him as pet all combine to make outsiders a little uncertain. Drugs used to make Jasper more comfortable and better able to undergo training he wants to be better for Rhys and uphold his end of the bargain (and perhaps more) being interpreted by Jasper's old crew's as a method of control and manipulation to change him into something they believe he never could have been. The party itself being a beautiful welcoming to their society, celebration of his progress and skills, and bonding with friends of his owner and showing affection to that owner by behaving as he did but seen by the old crew as a domineering torture and hunt. The world is breathing. Not to mention how intricate a single event and the things leading up to it have so many different possible viewpoints depending on the characters, their histories, and unconscious (or conscious) biases. Finally, the perfume. I'm pretty confident it is the scent they were talking about bottling from Jasper a little while ago. That is so very erotic. And kind of sweet to give a part of Jasper to the guests to take home.

You have very good command of English I completely understood the story and there's only a few places here in there that need a little thought as to what you meant. This was a hot story I really enjoyed it thank you for writing!

Very nice. Hope you continue.

Damn another hot chapter. The drop of sweat being placed on the tip of a cock and causing relentless fucking was hot. But I love stories that transform men to muscular sex crazed beasts by something entering their dicks and then fucking a man to create a slave or drone. Thanks for getting me hard.

I adored the first two stories, particularly the second chapter. This is an amazing interpretation of the aftermath of those events. I love that you have left it open for a fourth, I am curious what happened to the original Alpha and his new acquisitions. Brilliant! SO hot. Musk, insatiable horniness, converting others to enjoy it too. Beautiful.

Awesome end. Dad knows how to avoid pregnancies and still get your rocks off. Guys know what guys need. Loved the inclusion of Coach and Jack's control over both of them. Another great story, thanks for sharing your work with us.

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Really good story so far. Dr. Adam would make me dumber just looking at me! Is Markus going to get rubberized? Or experience chastity, to help him stay focused...

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