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3/30/22, 12:49 PM
This feels like a light novel now - the likes of Fate/Stay Night. Love the lore building! Keep it up and I hope you update soon.!

3/31/22, 6:12 AM
@Curious53 I think you may have described the vibe very aptly!

Anonymous
4/19/22, 7:02 AM
@Curious53 I would say more like tsukihime but they're both part of the nasuverse so same vibe makes sense
4/19/22, 5:45 AM
Ugh, this is so hot! How I wish there were a natural way for this to get a chapter two, perhaps even of Joaquin getting whored out properly.
4/18/22, 6:44 AM
Martin iPhones always auto translate. I read all the foreign language stories although things definitely get lost in translation sometimes lol. Good job on the story!

SklaveTimm
4/18/22, 11:11 AM
@Mrdick How good or bad is the auto translated version? Is it so bad, that a regular translation is worth the work?

4/18/22, 11:23 AM
@SklaveTimm well I guess that’s hard to say since I don’t read German. But I generally understand what your trying to write.
SklaveTimm
4/18/22, 11:19 AM
Danke, danke, danke! So viel Lob, da muss ich ja aufpassen, dass ich nicht abhebe. 😁 Ich hatte über Ostern etwas mehr Zeit als üblich, weshalb einige Teile zur Geschichte hinzugefügt werden konnten. Der eigentliche Plan war mal, dass es jede Woche einen Teil geben soll. Ich hoffe das auch durchzuhalten. Das Schreiben selbst gelingt ganz gut, aber.... Je umfangreicher die Story wird, um ao öfter muss ich in den alten Teilen schauen um nicht zu viel zu wiederholen oder gar meine Charaktere zu verwechseln... Bezüglich des Hinweises von Martin, ich poste mehrmals in der Woche links zu meinen stories auf Twitter, sollte also nach und nach eine kleine Leserschaft hier her bringen.
4/18/22, 7:56 AM
Sehr geile Story.. ich denke es gibt einige deutsche Leser.. und wenn es bekannt wird das man hier deutsche Geschichten findet können das auch noch mehr werden. Bin gespannt wie es weiter geht.
Martin
4/17/22, 9:52 PM
Die Stories bleiben geil und man ist gespannt was als nächstes passiert! Schade nur, dass Du immer nur recht wenig Leser haben wirst... So viel Deutsche User gibt's halt leider nicht.
4/17/22, 8:01 PM
Oh man this was my favorite story from you when I read your stories on Nifty. I agree with mstgay3000 about liking the old darker ending but this was just as great too. Curious if you are considering on remastering the 2nd chapter of this as well or making a new chapter? Either way thanks for this it was such a hot read!

4/17/22, 8:31 PM
Hey there, @AxelCyclone - glad you like 2.0. Right now the plan is to update the second part as well - maybe even put out a third part. I also have a whole library of older stories that will need to be updated to satisfy certain requirements.

4/17/22, 8:58 PM
@stimle Oh that sounds amazing. All though This series was my favorite Andres was my 2nd favorite and a whole lot others are tied for 3rd haha. Ill miss the hotel scene but excited to see joaquin at his job and whatever else you have planned!

Martin
4/17/22, 9:40 PM
@stimle If those 'requirements' make your stories so much better, then I'm really happy that you want to satisfy them :grin:
blankbot
4/16/22, 2:58 PM
Great writing!

4/17/22, 8:32 PM
@blankbot Thank you!!
Anonymous
4/17/22, 5:51 AM
Hope you write the sequel to this. Jaoquin is one of your character that I love and still reading about him after all these years.

4/17/22, 8:31 PM
Thanks, man. I'm working on updating the second part and am contemplating a third part.
4/16/22, 4:43 PM
I enjoyed both versions😊 I like all the new details on this one, but also liked the darker ending in the original too. Well done on both!👏

4/17/22, 8:29 PM
@MstGay3000 Thank you. Over the years I've often thought about updating older stories. Circumstances here forced my hand.