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4/19/22, 12:03 PM
I liked this a lot and I wish to know where it goes too. Will Noah be released from all fours ? Will he obey Alex unknowingly or knowingly ? Will Noah ever know who took his cherry ? Will Alex move into Noah's house and control all of his money (from the shadow) ? And so on.

Rubber_Lover14
4/24/22, 2:39 PM
@NephilimIts great to see that your already thinking of different ways this could go. Unfortunately, this will be a side project that ill probably only work on when I'm not currently working on my main series. However, I will try and bring more of the bondage aspects into A Jocks Karma. But that doesn't mean this series is over. After these responses, ill most definitely make a part two.
4/24/22, 4:31 AM
I don't think I knew this was you the first time I read this story. I'm so glad you posted it here, along with your backlist!
Anonymous
4/23/22, 4:29 AM
this is sooo hot… and sooo intimate!!!
4/17/22, 2:21 AM
The humiliation in the story is very present, but is it erotic humiliation or just humiliation? By the end of this chapter I was kind of rooting for the main character to put pool cleaner in Mark's coffee. Was anything about Mark's offer sincere, or was this all just a plot to have a humiliation slave? I'm not sure I would give this story another chapter of my attention to find out. It kind of lost me by this point. My only suggestion would be to either vary the action, or move the story along. I do not think you will have readers for 9-10 chapters of this story unless something happens or progresses to change the situation.

D&D
4/22/22, 8:29 PM
@amul Thanks for your comment. Mark will remain an ambiguous figure in the next chapter as well, but will start to reveal his intentions in the fifth. These chapters were used more to make Luke fall into despair and surrender to fate, from the next he will begin to be more active, or rather passive.
4/22/22, 4:13 PM
Great story I would love to obey u
4/22/22, 10:31 AM
A good dog is man's best friend.
4/22/22, 5:49 AM
Do you think you will ever add more to this hot hot tale? 😃😛😛😛
Anonymous
4/21/22, 9:39 PM
I wish they'd been a bit more forthcoming with their plans earlier in the interactions. If they communicate more from now on I will enjoy the story more.
4/21/22, 6:14 PM
Is it not the same story/ storyline in one of your stories on nifty, just another title and character names?

4/21/22, 8:09 PM
@BBoy I am reposting it here and posting the parts I didn't post on Nifty since I stopped posting there altogether.
Martin
4/21/22, 8:04 PM
What a hot transition! I really like where this is going. This the perfect kind of con non-con story!