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Anonymous
4/23/22, 4:29 AM
this is sooo hot… and sooo intimate!!!
4/17/22, 2:21 AM
The humiliation in the story is very present, but is it erotic humiliation or just humiliation? By the end of this chapter I was kind of rooting for the main character to put pool cleaner in Mark's coffee. Was anything about Mark's offer sincere, or was this all just a plot to have a humiliation slave? I'm not sure I would give this story another chapter of my attention to find out. It kind of lost me by this point. My only suggestion would be to either vary the action, or move the story along. I do not think you will have readers for 9-10 chapters of this story unless something happens or progresses to change the situation.

D&D
4/22/22, 8:29 PM
@amul Thanks for your comment. Mark will remain an ambiguous figure in the next chapter as well, but will start to reveal his intentions in the fifth. These chapters were used more to make Luke fall into despair and surrender to fate, from the next he will begin to be more active, or rather passive.
4/22/22, 4:13 PM
Great story I would love to obey u
4/22/22, 10:31 AM
A good dog is man's best friend.
4/22/22, 5:49 AM
Do you think you will ever add more to this hot hot tale? πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Anonymous
4/21/22, 9:39 PM
I wish they'd been a bit more forthcoming with their plans earlier in the interactions. If they communicate more from now on I will enjoy the story more.
4/21/22, 6:14 PM
Is it not the same story/ storyline in one of your stories on nifty, just another title and character names?

4/21/22, 8:09 PM
@BBoy I am reposting it here and posting the parts I didn't post on Nifty since I stopped posting there altogether.
Martin
4/21/22, 8:04 PM
What a hot transition! I really like where this is going. This the perfect kind of con non-con story!
Evan
4/21/22, 1:02 AM
@Cuddle-Switch. I did not really think about Rhys uncovering a trail of his own leading to Aris rather than obscuring it. And I should have. :) Brilliant idea. And a great way to add a little conflict to Rhys's and Aris's relationship. Why do you like characters ending in S. My brain struggles with using apostrophes with them. :D In case it wasn't clear, I am very eager for the next chapter and to see where you are both heading with things. Iskios has information the crew could use but also a vested interest in not intervening to keep competition to a minimum. Unless getting them to concentrate on their lost crew member opens more opportunities for him, perhaps. Having Jasper show off and Rhys still maintaining dominance was masterfully crafted. You should be proud. It was clear and felt very natural and real.
4/21/22, 12:00 AM
one of my favorite stories!!!! can’t wait for more