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toy #4
4/28/22, 5:17 AM
keep going...
Muscle-Flex
4/28/22, 12:45 AM
Man this chapter was so hot! Great scenes, stimulatingly described! (Spoilers ahead for anyone who hasn't read the chapter.) The weight-lifting scene at the gym already had me going, and then the fun in the locker room - whew! I loved the red rope and big boy Markie squirming helplessly in his tight tethers, going in and out of clarity about what is happening to him. The hot jock just keeps sinking deeper and deeper into his predicament: the video while he gets in his morning practice (gulp), and the photos that Doc Adam now has of him in very compromising situations... talk about a sticky web! Now, Darrah... doesn't he turn out to be interesting. Heh heh. Yeah, he's going to have Markus under his thumb now. Clearly he is involved in the larger machinations taking place, especially with that reference to the "boss". But just how much control does Darrah himself have? No doubt Markie is right to worry about Doc Adam seeing those photos... I have a feeling it is going to get a little harder for our study jock to keep others from noticing that something is going on - and not just because he's going to be putting on more muscle... it might involve a bit of chrome. Anyway, thanks for another fantastic installment!

Rubber_Lover14
4/28/22, 1:28 AM
@Muscle-Flex I'm so glad you enjoyed it ^^ I was worried people weren't going to enjoy it due to its excessive length. And yeah, who knows. Darrah could be anything at this point. We'll just have to wait and see. Maybe more of the jocks are involved, or perhaps they will fall under the Docs influence thanks to our idiotic jocks actions. Honestly, I'm not sure myself. I just write whatever turns me on most in the moment. So really anything could happen. If there's anything you would like to see happen, any suggestions, ideas, or ways I could improve, please let me know. I want any future chapters to be as good as possible. So a loyal reader such as yourself giving their input would be much appreciated (If your comfortable doing so). Anyways, Have a nice day ^^ Cant wait to write chapter 5
4/27/22, 8:34 PM
I hoped it wouldn't end where it did. I enjoyed the story very much. A few English errors that made understanding a hit and miss between one or three ideas, but good none the less!
Anonymous
4/27/22, 5:18 AM
Thank you for fulfilling a DnD fantasy of mine, this story was so well-written and SO hot. Loved the descriptions of Ollie and even the details about his party members sprinkled throughout. All of that really helped me connect with him as a character (on top of the kinky nature of his bondage lol). I especially like it when tickle victims get aroused from having their feet tickled, as well being driven so horny that they totally give into their helplessness and beg for more. Awesome work!

4/27/22, 3:52 PM
Hey thanks so much for the kind words! I’m so happy you liked it so much. I hope to have stories for the other party members as well. Love feet and tickling in my kink stories so I’m happy to hear there are others who feel the same.
4/26/22, 1:06 PM
Oh man such a hot story. I think this has to be one of my favorites if not my favorite series from you.. maybe not including the superhero ones cause im biased haha. With Keegan knowing how much Sean loves to be degraded I hope he kicks it up and then some if theres more chapters to come. Also Sean has a model for his face but does Keegan have someone that you think of when writing him? Thanks for the hot story Jack!

4/26/22, 8:19 PM
@AxelCyclone I'll add Keeg next chapter for you :)

4/27/22, 1:40 AM
@Jack Parker Awesome! You already had Logan Foote and he is so hot and a perfect Pick for who Sean could be so I've been curious at who you had in mind for Keegan. I had someone like Haydem Monteleone in mind when reading Keegan so im excited to see who you choose!
4/26/22, 6:51 PM
HEY MATE! Super hot story. I do have a request though....can you put the photos at the bottom? They kinda' fuck with my imagination when I'm creating these guys in my mind. That's why I'm reading the porn instead of looking at it.

Rubber_Lover14
4/26/22, 7:06 PM
@daemon I'm a bit confused by your request. As with all my stories, any photo of a man who is currently playing a significant role, or could possibly play a bigger roll in the future, can be found at the bottom of the story. So I'm not exactly sure why your asking me to add what is already there. Could it perhaps be a formatting issue when it comes to mobile?

Martin
4/26/22, 8:55 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 I guess there's a *"not"* missing in his sentence... Still, noone is forced to look at the images. I might add a feature that hides images for those who don't want to see them.

Rubber_Lover14
4/27/22, 12:29 AM
@Martin Fair enough. I might move them to the top. Or perhaps place a warning. I personally like including images myself. Helps me visualize the story and all that. But I understand its not for everyone. Perhaps a method of designating what the image is? Like if its part of a character, a pose their doing, or some sort of sex toy. Then you could have it to where Only specific things, like character references, are hidden. Idk, just an idea.
4/26/22, 3:24 PM
Damm that school sounds like fun now way better than mine high school anyway
4/25/22, 7:25 PM
Finally in the “read this” club. Yeah. 🤷🏼 It’s exceptional. Your attention to craft makes everything a joy for the eyes (and the mind) to follow. I loved the character dynamic. Finn’s perspective as he starts warming into the wish’s influence was ‘chef’s kiss’ dramatic-irony-done-well.

4/26/22, 2:39 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Thanks so much for reading!
4/26/22, 2:20 PM
JESUS CHRIST Nocturne!! Your usual (high) craft level, but now with a lore-gasm to boot. This is phenomenal work.

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Well thanks so much. I’m kind of thinking that this world building that I came up with is going to give it enough impetus to be about the length of a novella. I’m really looking forward to seeing what people think of the third part because I feel like now the story is starting to blend into a more clear direction.
4/8/22, 9:43 PM
This is fascinating, and very hot! I'm excited to see more of it when it's ready!

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@Dace oops I accidentally didn't reply directly to you before. Thanks much!