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Rubber_Lover14
4/29/22, 1:41 AM
This is one of the best transformation stories I've ever read! The musk, the milking, forcing the officer to drink his chiefs muscletit milk. It was all amazing. I wonder if the doctor has done this to others outside the officers. Who was their first victim? Who will be their next victim? What other transformations is he capable of performing? Honestly, this story is amazing, and I would not be mad at seeing a continuation, spin off, or prequel. Like what about the chief? Was he a willing participant, or was he tricked into it? Seeing as this was written months ago, I doubt anything will come of this comment in terms of new stories, but I just wanted to share how truly amazing it was. Such a huge turn on. Male lactation and intense milking has always been a link of mine, but I've rarely seen stories that truly do it justice. And this is one of them. I'll totally be revisiting this story at some point to reread. For research purposes of course 👀

4/29/22, 1:47 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 Thanks for the lovely comment! I'm glad you enjoyed this story, and yes I do plan to continue it at some point. The second part was slow to follow the first and because of that I made it a point to give it a reasonable ending while leaving it open for future chapters so that readers wouldn't feel cliff-hung. I'm currently on an erotic writing hiatus while focus on stuff for my job that requires me to do a fair amount of writing outside of work, but I haven't quit writing and will get back to this enjoyable pastime as soon as I can.

Rubber_Lover14
4/29/22, 1:57 AM
@amul Ah, fair enough. Work comes first after all ^^. I can totally see why your taking a hiatus. If you already write alot for work and stuff, then also doing writing for GSS could give you burn out or writer's block, which is the worst. I've had times where I've written too much and then just been unable to write for weeks. So yeah, take as much time as u need for your Hiatus. Just gives us plenty of time to speculate on all the kinky outcomes this storyline could have 🤤 Anyways, I hope you have a nice day ^^ and I hope your not working yourself too hard with work. Burn out is the worst and I'd hate to see u suffer from it. I've experienced it and it was not fun. Anywho, have a nice day ^^
4/28/22, 11:31 PM
And Keegans face is revealed and his Puppy is coming into his own! Thanks for the Pictures Jack! Luis is definitely hot too and see him perfectly with Sean/Logan. Curious to what Seans persona is going to be for his shoot but hes too cute as a puppy to be something else haha. Thanks for the hot chapter!
Gingcub
4/28/22, 6:14 PM
Love this idea! I would be super into reading about what happens to these boys next!
toy #4
4/28/22, 5:17 AM
keep going...
Muscle-Flex
4/28/22, 12:45 AM
Man this chapter was so hot! Great scenes, stimulatingly described! (Spoilers ahead for anyone who hasn't read the chapter.) The weight-lifting scene at the gym already had me going, and then the fun in the locker room - whew! I loved the red rope and big boy Markie squirming helplessly in his tight tethers, going in and out of clarity about what is happening to him. The hot jock just keeps sinking deeper and deeper into his predicament: the video while he gets in his morning practice (gulp), and the photos that Doc Adam now has of him in very compromising situations... talk about a sticky web! Now, Darrah... doesn't he turn out to be interesting. Heh heh. Yeah, he's going to have Markus under his thumb now. Clearly he is involved in the larger machinations taking place, especially with that reference to the "boss". But just how much control does Darrah himself have? No doubt Markie is right to worry about Doc Adam seeing those photos... I have a feeling it is going to get a little harder for our study jock to keep others from noticing that something is going on - and not just because he's going to be putting on more muscle... it might involve a bit of chrome. Anyway, thanks for another fantastic installment!

Rubber_Lover14
4/28/22, 1:28 AM
@Muscle-Flex I'm so glad you enjoyed it ^^ I was worried people weren't going to enjoy it due to its excessive length. And yeah, who knows. Darrah could be anything at this point. We'll just have to wait and see. Maybe more of the jocks are involved, or perhaps they will fall under the Docs influence thanks to our idiotic jocks actions. Honestly, I'm not sure myself. I just write whatever turns me on most in the moment. So really anything could happen. If there's anything you would like to see happen, any suggestions, ideas, or ways I could improve, please let me know. I want any future chapters to be as good as possible. So a loyal reader such as yourself giving their input would be much appreciated (If your comfortable doing so). Anyways, Have a nice day ^^ Cant wait to write chapter 5
4/27/22, 8:34 PM
I hoped it wouldn't end where it did. I enjoyed the story very much. A few English errors that made understanding a hit and miss between one or three ideas, but good none the less!
Anonymous
4/27/22, 5:18 AM
Thank you for fulfilling a DnD fantasy of mine, this story was so well-written and SO hot. Loved the descriptions of Ollie and even the details about his party members sprinkled throughout. All of that really helped me connect with him as a character (on top of the kinky nature of his bondage lol). I especially like it when tickle victims get aroused from having their feet tickled, as well being driven so horny that they totally give into their helplessness and beg for more. Awesome work!

4/27/22, 3:52 PM
Hey thanks so much for the kind words! I’m so happy you liked it so much. I hope to have stories for the other party members as well. Love feet and tickling in my kink stories so I’m happy to hear there are others who feel the same.
4/26/22, 1:06 PM
Oh man such a hot story. I think this has to be one of my favorites if not my favorite series from you.. maybe not including the superhero ones cause im biased haha. With Keegan knowing how much Sean loves to be degraded I hope he kicks it up and then some if theres more chapters to come. Also Sean has a model for his face but does Keegan have someone that you think of when writing him? Thanks for the hot story Jack!

4/26/22, 8:19 PM
@AxelCyclone I'll add Keeg next chapter for you :)

4/27/22, 1:40 AM
@Jack Parker Awesome! You already had Logan Foote and he is so hot and a perfect Pick for who Sean could be so I've been curious at who you had in mind for Keegan. I had someone like Haydem Monteleone in mind when reading Keegan so im excited to see who you choose!
4/26/22, 6:51 PM
HEY MATE! Super hot story. I do have a request though....can you put the photos at the bottom? They kinda' fuck with my imagination when I'm creating these guys in my mind. That's why I'm reading the porn instead of looking at it.

Rubber_Lover14
4/26/22, 7:06 PM
@daemon I'm a bit confused by your request. As with all my stories, any photo of a man who is currently playing a significant role, or could possibly play a bigger roll in the future, can be found at the bottom of the story. So I'm not exactly sure why your asking me to add what is already there. Could it perhaps be a formatting issue when it comes to mobile?

Martin
4/26/22, 8:55 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 I guess there's a *"not"* missing in his sentence... Still, noone is forced to look at the images. I might add a feature that hides images for those who don't want to see them.

Rubber_Lover14
4/27/22, 12:29 AM
@Martin Fair enough. I might move them to the top. Or perhaps place a warning. I personally like including images myself. Helps me visualize the story and all that. But I understand its not for everyone. Perhaps a method of designating what the image is? Like if its part of a character, a pose their doing, or some sort of sex toy. Then you could have it to where Only specific things, like character references, are hidden. Idk, just an idea.
4/26/22, 3:24 PM
Damm that school sounds like fun now way better than mine high school anyway