Recent Comments

slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/19/22, 4:42 AM
Let the training begin! Hot!
5/19/22, 2:25 AM
So glad to see the chapter finally published and being enjoyed as it is by everyone. You know I'm here for the ride. Gratz buddy!
5/18/22, 6:30 PM
I liked the alpha stuff lmao
R P
5/18/22, 2:25 PM
Such a hot story! Loved seeing Jack dominating the coach, and Everrett submitting further.
5/18/22, 12:44 PM
Writing the next one as we speak, so will be done by the end of today. Thanks guys pleasure give feedback x
5/18/22, 12:29 PM
I am in toral bliss to read this new chapter, how i wish to read more just like this.
5/18/22, 11:58 AM
Good to have a new chapter. Hope we don't have to wait as long for the next one.
5/18/22, 10:45 AM
This was fantastic. Can’t wait for more! Welcome back
LucasT
5/18/22, 10:34 AM
One of the most impressive stories I've ever read. Looking forward to next chapter. It was almost perfectly written. You know how to describe situations, people, characters. Really great work. I would like to see Chris turned into a drone. This arrogant, selfish boy destroyed and turned into something contrary to his original personality :D
5/18/22, 9:21 AM
Thank you all for the positive feedback. It’s really encouraging and I’m really glad you enjoyed!