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5/20/22, 4:10 PM
I love a story with a good jock slut soooo against my better judgement, I'm rooting for rusty to continue on. Just let it happen Carter. 🙈
5/20/22, 3:21 PM
Such a hot chapter! The control is quick and so far, irrevocable , which makes it hotter. I'm loving how he is assigning them roles and fostering their desire for hypnosis. Can't wait to see Sett betray the twins, and eventually, for Jay to find out of the betrayal and futilely try to get away.
5/20/22, 11:27 AM
I echo all the comments about what a horrible person Rusty is. :p I don’t like stories where jerks like him—who are also internalized homophobes, if we’re fair—have lots of power. I get that that does it for some people, but not me, especially because (as others have also said) Carter is such a nice, interesting guy. And he’s not the classic “I don’t want to bottom because that’s gay” trope—he doesn’t want to bottom because he doesn’t enjoy it, which is totally fair and understandable. A good-natured character not consenting and then being forced to by a jerk is not a fun time for me, but to each their own! Is there a character sheet option to A. Punch Rusty in the face and then B. Pull some of the dick out of his personality? :p

En Vogue
5/20/22, 2:49 PM
@Feed Your Head Eh, I mean, if Carter immediately flips the tables on Rusty, the story pretty much just... ends? At Chapter 2? Carter *is* fun and a great character, but "bad guy gets power and wreaks havoc for the duration of the plot until the good guy is able to overpower him" is just a way more interesting story than "good guy immediately grabs power from bad guy, ends any conflict and drama by chapter 2". So I vote that Carter confront Rusty, but then that things keep getting complicated in unexpected ways as Carter struggles to regain an upper hand!
5/20/22, 2:15 PM
@EdIam would love some stealing boyfriends in your stories please... 🙏
Anonymous
5/20/22, 1:43 PM
Confront Rusty (use those wit and manipulation stars while he’s still got ‘em)
5/20/22, 11:30 AM
Really enjoy that story!! Personnally I'd love to see Jay resisting a fair bit when Ian tries to subdue him.
5/19/22, 11:35 PM
I guess confront rusty or run seem like the best. This is a cool looking series, I hope you continue the wholesome super villain one!

5/20/22, 1:44 AM
@Botbot Thanks! I have some note scribbled down for that one.

5/20/22, 11:20 AM
@bluesuedewho cool! I'm excited to read more :)
5/20/22, 9:54 AM
Haha thanks guys keep me posted on what you want to see next. Next chapter won’t be released until Monday night probably.

5/20/22, 10:43 AM
@Anyonka i really am enjoying your story, fuck its so erotic to take someones bkyfriend away, it would be nicer to see ian start to make jay feel jealous, make collin slutty around ian and make him a little aloft from jay. Eitherway i really do enjoy the story and i am looking forward for the next chapter.
5/20/22, 9:22 AM
My god that was hot. Nothing hotter than brainwashing someone's boyfriend ☺
5/20/22, 8:51 AM
Fantastic continuation. What about those twins though?