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Anonymous
5/21/22, 11:55 AM
This story was so amazing, I really hope you write more!
Kent
5/21/22, 8:03 AM
I don’t want Carter to get lost!!! He’s so likable…down with rusty. Confront Rusty
Jamiemboy
5/21/22, 2:34 AM
Hot :) more please!!
5/20/22, 11:17 PM
One of the things I really.like about your stories is that the people who get changed into needly little cocksluts tend to deserve it. I hope Carter changes his stats and Rusty ends up getting his comeuppance in the end. That said,.if Carter takes a trip through empty headed jockslut territory before ending up on top, I wouldn't complain.

Anonymous
5/21/22, 1:39 AM
@SageKepler Oooh, "deserve" is an interesting word here! Idk if I think of many of this author's stories through that lens, tbh? Most of the "needy little cocksluts" he writes tend to really _enjoy_ their transformations lol, so I rarely see it as a punishment or a bad thing. Taking away things Carter cares about (like his brain) is a lot more invasive than making him capable of prostate orgasms lol, so I could see the story going a lot of ways! Rusty is annoying but I don't think he needs to end up a sub for the story to have a "happy ending" really
5/20/22, 10:23 PM
Oh, I'm liking this very much. I think Carter should just let it happen.
5/20/22, 10:43 AM
Really hoping to see Carter turn the tables on Rusty, because he seems like a chill dude I'd love to hang with and Rusty is ruining a perfectly hot fantasy with his obnoxious personality. I mean, I get the whole appeal of a mind control kink is changing people and watching them change, but I just have a fundamental visceral aversion to seeing somebody who is THIS much of an asshole get to have things their way.

5/20/22, 11:28 AM
@goodbiforever Amen to this. Eventually I stop being interested in the story because I hate the character so much that it’s no longer fun to read. Granted, it’s a testament to the author’s skill that he can write characters that get such strong reactions! :)

R P
5/20/22, 12:33 PM
@goodbiforever I completely agree! Would love to see Carter confront Rusty and turn him into the exact kind of dumb jock he’s been trying to turn Carter into. If Carter becomes a bit more bi/gay along the way, that’s just gravy :D

Buckyboi
5/20/22, 4:04 PM
@goodbiforever Ditto to this entire thread!

5/20/22, 8:19 PM
@R P that would be sweet delicious karma

R P
5/20/22, 10:17 PM
On rereading I just wanted to add that this first chapter has a hot concept, and is super well written, so definitely keen to read more! I’d just like to see Rusty get some comeuppance as well.
Anonymous
5/20/22, 9:31 PM
You write best with non consensual and sometimes cruel transformation - the Tyler chapter of your other work. In my opinion of course! I'd love to see some more noncon changes, perhaps SPH or feminisation (though I don't think you've ever written any to be fair)
5/20/22, 4:10 PM
I love a story with a good jock slut soooo against my better judgement, I'm rooting for rusty to continue on. Just let it happen Carter. 🙈
5/20/22, 3:21 PM
Such a hot chapter! The control is quick and so far, irrevocable , which makes it hotter. I'm loving how he is assigning them roles and fostering their desire for hypnosis. Can't wait to see Sett betray the twins, and eventually, for Jay to find out of the betrayal and futilely try to get away.
5/20/22, 11:27 AM
I echo all the comments about what a horrible person Rusty is. :p I don’t like stories where jerks like him—who are also internalized homophobes, if we’re fair—have lots of power. I get that that does it for some people, but not me, especially because (as others have also said) Carter is such a nice, interesting guy. And he’s not the classic “I don’t want to bottom because that’s gay” trope—he doesn’t want to bottom because he doesn’t enjoy it, which is totally fair and understandable. A good-natured character not consenting and then being forced to by a jerk is not a fun time for me, but to each their own! Is there a character sheet option to A. Punch Rusty in the face and then B. Pull some of the dick out of his personality? :p

En Vogue
5/20/22, 2:49 PM
@Feed Your Head Eh, I mean, if Carter immediately flips the tables on Rusty, the story pretty much just... ends? At Chapter 2? Carter *is* fun and a great character, but "bad guy gets power and wreaks havoc for the duration of the plot until the good guy is able to overpower him" is just a way more interesting story than "good guy immediately grabs power from bad guy, ends any conflict and drama by chapter 2". So I vote that Carter confront Rusty, but then that things keep getting complicated in unexpected ways as Carter struggles to regain an upper hand!