Recent Comments

5/22/22, 12:43 PM
I’m excited to see Carter become one of the physically customized insatiable self-lubing fucksluts you write so well, I think what many other people are picking up on is that the story needs unresolved tension as the changes get wild and sexy. I like the idea of Carter and Rusty having power over changing each other with a level of not having proper control over their power to change. Make Carter into a dumb and ultra fuckable fat assed sex toy, but he’s desire to be a caster gives him some STRONG charm spells and power he can realy only even conceive of using to get plowed hard and treated like a slut. Give Rusty the experience he wants topping Carter but make it twisted in a way he finds he doesn’t enjoy being so much at someone else’s mercy in the kind of way he was happy to use Carter. Or reveal that Rusty’s weirder personality elements like an insistence on treating Carter like a dummy and an object are a result of someone ELSE already having edited Rusty with a sheet. As always love your writing!
R P
5/22/22, 5:04 AM
Wow! This is so so hot. I may like it even more than your Donnie vs the Titans stuff, and I didn’t think that was possible. Dom Tim is just so much fun with slutty Conner. Particularly loved this line “real beauty…it wasn’t to just be seen…it was to be used…used until it couldn’t be enjoyed any more.” 🔥
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/21/22, 6:29 PM
Damn! So many of us wish such a transformation was actually possible!
R P
5/21/22, 3:28 PM
Hot! I’d love to see that pup about a bone too 😈
Anonymous
5/21/22, 3:19 PM
I’m loving this story! Stealing the boyfriend, making him try to seduce his master with his feet. It’s all amazing!
5/21/22, 3:08 PM
I think he tries to confront Rusty but can't do anything because he's the game master and Rusty is already writing down all those bottomy traits and that robe is starting to show a definite buldge 😈
Anonymous
5/21/22, 11:55 AM
This story was so amazing, I really hope you write more!
Kent
5/21/22, 8:03 AM
I don’t want Carter to get lost!!! He’s so likable…down with rusty. Confront Rusty
Jamiemboy
5/21/22, 2:34 AM
Hot :) more please!!
5/20/22, 11:17 PM
One of the things I really.like about your stories is that the people who get changed into needly little cocksluts tend to deserve it. I hope Carter changes his stats and Rusty ends up getting his comeuppance in the end. That said,.if Carter takes a trip through empty headed jockslut territory before ending up on top, I wouldn't complain.

Anonymous
5/21/22, 1:39 AM
@SageKepler Oooh, "deserve" is an interesting word here! Idk if I think of many of this author's stories through that lens, tbh? Most of the "needy little cocksluts" he writes tend to really _enjoy_ their transformations lol, so I rarely see it as a punishment or a bad thing. Taking away things Carter cares about (like his brain) is a lot more invasive than making him capable of prostate orgasms lol, so I could see the story going a lot of ways! Rusty is annoying but I don't think he needs to end up a sub for the story to have a "happy ending" really