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5/20/22, 5:39 AM
Love this idea and so well written. Can't wait to see how it pans out. Really happy to see big sub/small top stuff on here. My vote would be change his stats.

5/22/22, 6:41 PM
@fanboi214 Thanks! This is my first time writing big sub/small top so hopefully it ends up working for people!
5/20/22, 3:44 AM
Whoa, this hits the right buttons and I'm excited to see this continue! A bit iffy on the constant dumb jock comments and while I do want him to be one, hoping it's only that dumb jock other Carter to affect stud nerd Carter's thoughts. I'm voting for him to Confront Rusty and try to at least make consented changes or to make the changes enjoyable for his real self. EDIT : I also have a theory that as a Game Master, Rusty can add things to Carter and remove things he added, but not remove what's been set by Carter having followed the rules of character creation and the game itself setting things up like his Sewing 3 skill.

5/22/22, 6:40 PM
@ChronoSeth Thanks! The mechanics will be explained a bit more next chapter.
Anonymous
5/20/22, 3:40 AM
ooo i like this so far. hope rusty gets just as fucked up as he's dishing out lmao, altho ofc considering ur track record i'll probably enjoy anything you write. i say change his stats!

5/22/22, 6:40 PM
@ Thanks! It definitely won't be a straightforward journey for the characters!
5/20/22, 3:02 AM
Interesting. The idea of rpg made real is super fun and sexy.

5/22/22, 6:39 PM
@Heru Kane Thanks!
5/20/22, 2:36 AM
Having read a bunch of drafts of this, I’m really curious to see how and where it goes. It’s a really fun and hot setup and I really enjoyed both the characters.

5/22/22, 6:39 PM
@MonsterMash62 Thanks for help with editing and ideas! (And for commenting even when you're probably sick of seeing drafts :sweat_smile:)
5/22/22, 3:26 PM
Change his stats
5/22/22, 1:25 PM
Just let it happen
5/22/22, 12:43 PM
I’m excited to see Carter become one of the physically customized insatiable self-lubing fucksluts you write so well, I think what many other people are picking up on is that the story needs unresolved tension as the changes get wild and sexy. I like the idea of Carter and Rusty having power over changing each other with a level of not having proper control over their power to change. Make Carter into a dumb and ultra fuckable fat assed sex toy, but he’s desire to be a caster gives him some STRONG charm spells and power he can realy only even conceive of using to get plowed hard and treated like a slut. Give Rusty the experience he wants topping Carter but make it twisted in a way he finds he doesn’t enjoy being so much at someone else’s mercy in the kind of way he was happy to use Carter. Or reveal that Rusty’s weirder personality elements like an insistence on treating Carter like a dummy and an object are a result of someone ELSE already having edited Rusty with a sheet. As always love your writing!
R P
5/22/22, 5:04 AM
Wow! This is so so hot. I may like it even more than your Donnie vs the Titans stuff, and I didn’t think that was possible. Dom Tim is just so much fun with slutty Conner. Particularly loved this line “real beauty…it wasn’t to just be seen…it was to be used…used until it couldn’t be enjoyed any more.” 🔥
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5/21/22, 6:29 PM
Damn! So many of us wish such a transformation was actually possible!