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R P
5/21/22, 3:28 PM
Hot! I’d love to see that pup about a bone too 😈
Anonymous
5/21/22, 3:19 PM
I’m loving this story! Stealing the boyfriend, making him try to seduce his master with his feet. It’s all amazing!
5/21/22, 3:08 PM
I think he tries to confront Rusty but can't do anything because he's the game master and Rusty is already writing down all those bottomy traits and that robe is starting to show a definite buldge 😈
Anonymous
5/21/22, 11:55 AM
This story was so amazing, I really hope you write more!
Kent
5/21/22, 8:03 AM
I don’t want Carter to get lost!!! He’s so likable…down with rusty. Confront Rusty
Jamiemboy
5/21/22, 2:34 AM
Hot :) more please!!
5/20/22, 11:17 PM
One of the things I really.like about your stories is that the people who get changed into needly little cocksluts tend to deserve it. I hope Carter changes his stats and Rusty ends up getting his comeuppance in the end. That said,.if Carter takes a trip through empty headed jockslut territory before ending up on top, I wouldn't complain.

Anonymous
5/21/22, 1:39 AM
@SageKepler Oooh, "deserve" is an interesting word here! Idk if I think of many of this author's stories through that lens, tbh? Most of the "needy little cocksluts" he writes tend to really _enjoy_ their transformations lol, so I rarely see it as a punishment or a bad thing. Taking away things Carter cares about (like his brain) is a lot more invasive than making him capable of prostate orgasms lol, so I could see the story going a lot of ways! Rusty is annoying but I don't think he needs to end up a sub for the story to have a "happy ending" really
5/20/22, 10:23 PM
Oh, I'm liking this very much. I think Carter should just let it happen.
5/20/22, 10:43 AM
Really hoping to see Carter turn the tables on Rusty, because he seems like a chill dude I'd love to hang with and Rusty is ruining a perfectly hot fantasy with his obnoxious personality. I mean, I get the whole appeal of a mind control kink is changing people and watching them change, but I just have a fundamental visceral aversion to seeing somebody who is THIS much of an asshole get to have things their way.

5/20/22, 11:28 AM
@goodbiforever Amen to this. Eventually I stop being interested in the story because I hate the character so much that it’s no longer fun to read. Granted, it’s a testament to the author’s skill that he can write characters that get such strong reactions! :)

R P
5/20/22, 12:33 PM
@goodbiforever I completely agree! Would love to see Carter confront Rusty and turn him into the exact kind of dumb jock he’s been trying to turn Carter into. If Carter becomes a bit more bi/gay along the way, that’s just gravy :D

Buckyboi
5/20/22, 4:04 PM
@goodbiforever Ditto to this entire thread!

5/20/22, 8:19 PM
@R P that would be sweet delicious karma

R P
5/20/22, 10:17 PM
On rereading I just wanted to add that this first chapter has a hot concept, and is super well written, so definitely keen to read more! I’d just like to see Rusty get some comeuppance as well.
Anonymous
5/20/22, 9:31 PM
You write best with non consensual and sometimes cruel transformation - the Tyler chapter of your other work. In my opinion of course! I'd love to see some more noncon changes, perhaps SPH or feminisation (though I don't think you've ever written any to be fair)