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5/20/22, 3:02 AM
Interesting. The idea of rpg made real is super fun and sexy.

5/22/22, 6:39 PM
@Heru Kane Thanks!
5/20/22, 2:36 AM
Having read a bunch of drafts of this, I’m really curious to see how and where it goes. It’s a really fun and hot setup and I really enjoyed both the characters.

5/22/22, 6:39 PM
@MonsterMash62 Thanks for help with editing and ideas! (And for commenting even when you're probably sick of seeing drafts :sweat_smile:)
5/22/22, 3:26 PM
Change his stats
5/22/22, 1:25 PM
Just let it happen
5/22/22, 12:43 PM
I’m excited to see Carter become one of the physically customized insatiable self-lubing fucksluts you write so well, I think what many other people are picking up on is that the story needs unresolved tension as the changes get wild and sexy. I like the idea of Carter and Rusty having power over changing each other with a level of not having proper control over their power to change. Make Carter into a dumb and ultra fuckable fat assed sex toy, but he’s desire to be a caster gives him some STRONG charm spells and power he can realy only even conceive of using to get plowed hard and treated like a slut. Give Rusty the experience he wants topping Carter but make it twisted in a way he finds he doesn’t enjoy being so much at someone else’s mercy in the kind of way he was happy to use Carter. Or reveal that Rusty’s weirder personality elements like an insistence on treating Carter like a dummy and an object are a result of someone ELSE already having edited Rusty with a sheet. As always love your writing!
R P
5/22/22, 5:04 AM
Wow! This is so so hot. I may like it even more than your Donnie vs the Titans stuff, and I didn’t think that was possible. Dom Tim is just so much fun with slutty Conner. Particularly loved this line “real beauty…it wasn’t to just be seen…it was to be used…used until it couldn’t be enjoyed any more.” 🔥
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5/21/22, 6:29 PM
Damn! So many of us wish such a transformation was actually possible!
R P
5/21/22, 3:28 PM
Hot! I’d love to see that pup about a bone too 😈
Anonymous
5/21/22, 3:19 PM
I’m loving this story! Stealing the boyfriend, making him try to seduce his master with his feet. It’s all amazing!
5/21/22, 3:08 PM
I think he tries to confront Rusty but can't do anything because he's the game master and Rusty is already writing down all those bottomy traits and that robe is starting to show a definite buldge 😈