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6/10/22, 3:16 AM
I WANT THIS DONE TO MEEEEEEEE
6/9/22, 11:08 AM
Sweet it's back ^_^
6/9/22, 3:27 AM
A hot little scene with a sweet and romantic ending.
6/9/22, 1:14 AM
Excellent choice of artwork for your short story. The same artist had another very similar painting that was sci-fi instead of fantasy but same idea - the slave is strapped onto the larger master like a permanent cocksleeve. It is an obscenely horny thought.
Anonymous
6/8/22, 1:21 PM
This is my favorite story on here in ages. I would love to see Carter get dominated by Rusty before eventually enlisting Dusty to help turn the tables on Rusty, potentially resulting a happy ending for all (pun definitely intended). Maybe I'm crazy, but I'm kind of shipping Rusty and Carter - they appear to be attracted to each other and seem to have at least a few common interests. The only issue is, of course, that Rusty is a total tool. It feels to me like his biggest problem is his overconfidence, and I feel like his desire to change Carter into a buttslut (against his will or otherwise) is not driven by malice but is just his overconfidence getting in the way of all other considerations (listening to other people's opinions/preferences, not being a jerk, etc.) Maybe Rusty's default stats have his confidence at a 5 - if Carter could turn that down to a reasonable level (and maybe turn up his maturity?) Rusty could potentially end up being an ok dude and partner for Carter.

6/8/22, 8:29 PM
@ Thanks! I'm glad people are picking up that Rusty isn't deliberately cruel, just horny and self-absorbed. His goal isn't to make Carter suffer or humiliate him (even though those are obvious side-effects of his attempts to make Carter enjoy himself). I'm not anticipating a redemption arc for Rusty, but I also I don't have a defined end-point for this story since I'm letting readers influence the action.
6/8/22, 3:51 AM
Amazing
6/8/22, 2:41 AM
I feel like this story crossed the rubicon from being BDSM to being what I call a "psycho dom" story. Masters who aren't in control of themselves and their emotions aren't really all that sexy. Certainly not at all compared to masters who are methodical, deliberate, who plan and predict and are firmly in control. This master is substantially less sadistic than in some other stories, but because he's like a child in his behavior and sort of retarded when it comes to understanding how his slave is going to react to the things he does, he doesn't come across as a BDSM master just an abusive boyfriend. If that's your intent for the story, that's fine, but as I said it's not very sexy.
Danny pup
6/8/22, 2:41 AM
Woof , very hot cant wait for next chapter
6/8/22, 1:58 AM
An unusual story, but quite erotic. I loved it!
6/7/22, 7:33 PM
Sexy story!