Recent Comments

6/12/22, 7:15 AM
Wow! Is this your first story for the site? It's really well written. Great pacing, great descriptions. A fucked up fairy tale :grin:

Martin
6/14/22, 4:26 PM
@SyntheticHyacinth Have you figured out why you're struggling with uploading stories? That should not happen. Just make sure to NEVER use the browser back button when submitting a story.

Martin
6/14/22, 7:18 PM
@SyntheticHyacinth Thx, I'll check it out. Maybe there's a bug there...
6/14/22, 10:02 AM
This reminds me of those Silver Age Superman Comic covers. And Captain Planet for sure. Very inventive!
6/14/22, 9:34 AM
OMG I love it, very very like and love. :heart_eyes:
Kent
6/13/22, 11:58 PM
I need more immediately 🐶
Tanner
6/13/22, 4:05 PM
Keep up the good work! Especially the Richie stuff. It’s really hot.
Anonymous
6/13/22, 9:24 AM
I think I speak for everyone when I say we're all eagerly awaiting new chapters!
Anonymous
6/12/22, 3:49 PM
I like father and son story's plot the most.
Anonymous
6/12/22, 9:49 AM
This was amazing! Goblins and Orcs are the best
6/9/22, 10:22 PM
Continue?

6/10/22, 3:18 AM
I might eventually. It was intended as a once off but I may spin it out into a longer one if I get the inspiration. @Maxigay

6/12/22, 12:07 AM
@Alpha Artemis Please...
6/10/22, 7:38 PM
Need to take an editing pass at this one, there is a lengthy repeated segment. For a moment I thought that Daniel's punishment was to be trapped in a Doctor Strange style time loop. The scene was very hot, but to be honest the interruption by Jamel threw the scene off and caused me to lose my boner. Still a great job and I am enjoying the story.

6/10/22, 8:15 PM
@amul thank you so much for bringing that editing mishap to my attention. I honestly have no idea what happened, but I believe I’ve made the necessary edits I understand where your coming from about the Jamel section. My intention was to find a way to flesh out caging officers and expand upon them. I can only apologise to your boner, haha Thank you for the feedback and I’m glad you’re enjoying!-

6/10/22, 8:26 PM
@SlaveBoyJG You're welcome and thanks for sharing your story! Regarding the Jamel situation, my recommendation is to handle character introductions outside of a sex scene. The issue (specifically) is that as soon as Jamel appeared I became distracted by the myriad possibilities of his presence. Was he there to fuck? (yes, it turned out), was he there to stop the action? Is he James' superior and going to flip the tables on James? There's too many possible branches to consider while still retaining the charged eroticism that you want building during a sex scene. You have left the reader in the dark as to the background of these shadowy and seemingly omnipotent Cagers. My personal theory is that Cagers come from the caged boys they torment (who manage to survive with their minds intact). That would explain why the Cagers themselves have big dicks but also throw big-dicked boys into chastity. It would also explain why they have such a sadistic streak and are so sex-obsessed.

6/10/22, 8:59 PM
@amul I find your personal head cannon very intriguing. I like the idea of leaving their background up to the reader’s imagination, make them that much more ominous, but perhaps in the near future I may just have to shed some light on the Cagers. For now, ire let you reader theorise about the officers that lurk in the shadows. For Daniel, I think his story (this one at least) is at its end. He is now another claimed boy. I did have a final part that would further enforce that position, but I decided against it feeling it wasn’t needed. However, I’m debating with myself. Again, thank you. It’s so nice to have constructive chats Ps: you’ve got me thinking of a James & Jamel spin-off