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Jun 10, 2022
Tanner
6/13/22, 4:05 PM
Keep up the good work! Especially the Richie stuff. It’s really hot.
Jan 3, 2022
Anonymous
6/13/22, 9:24 AM
I think I speak for everyone when I say we're all eagerly awaiting new chapters!
Jun 12, 2022
Anonymous
6/12/22, 3:49 PM
I like father and son story's plot the most.
Jun 12, 2022
Anonymous
6/12/22, 9:49 AM
This was amazing! Goblins and Orcs are the best
Jun 7, 2022
6/9/22, 10:22 PM
Continue?
6/10/22, 3:18 AM
I might eventually. It was intended as a once off but I may spin it out into a longer one if I get the inspiration. @Maxigay
6/12/22, 12:07 AM
@Alpha Artemis Please...
Jun 10, 2022
6/10/22, 7:38 PM
Need to take an editing pass at this one, there is a lengthy repeated segment. For a moment I thought that Daniel's punishment was to be trapped in a Doctor Strange style time loop. The scene was very hot, but to be honest the interruption by Jamel threw the scene off and caused me to lose my boner. Still a great job and I am enjoying the story.
6/10/22, 8:15 PM
@amul thank you so much for bringing that editing mishap to my attention. I honestly have no idea what happened, but I believe I’ve made the necessary edits I understand where your coming from about the Jamel section. My intention was to find a way to flesh out caging officers and expand upon them. I can only apologise to your boner, haha Thank you for the feedback and I’m glad you’re enjoying!-
6/10/22, 8:26 PM
@SlaveBoyJG You're welcome and thanks for sharing your story! Regarding the Jamel situation, my recommendation is to handle character introductions outside of a sex scene. The issue (specifically) is that as soon as Jamel appeared I became distracted by the myriad possibilities of his presence. Was he there to fuck? (yes, it turned out), was he there to stop the action? Is he James' superior and going to flip the tables on James? There's too many possible branches to consider while still retaining the charged eroticism that you want building during a sex scene. You have left the reader in the dark as to the background of these shadowy and seemingly omnipotent Cagers. My personal theory is that Cagers come from the caged boys they torment (who manage to survive with their minds intact). That would explain why the Cagers themselves have big dicks but also throw big-dicked boys into chastity. It would also explain why they have such a sadistic streak and are so sex-obsessed.
6/10/22, 8:59 PM
@amul I find your personal head cannon very intriguing. I like the idea of leaving their background up to the reader’s imagination, make them that much more ominous, but perhaps in the near future I may just have to shed some light on the Cagers. For now, ire let you reader theorise about the officers that lurk in the shadows. For Daniel, I think his story (this one at least) is at its end. He is now another claimed boy. I did have a final part that would further enforce that position, but I decided against it feeling it wasn’t needed. However, I’m debating with myself. Again, thank you. It’s so nice to have constructive chats Ps: you’ve got me thinking of a James & Jamel spin-off
Jun 10, 2022
6/10/22, 6:05 PM
I appreciate the author taking the time to write and post the story This last chapter unfortunately descended into a kind of morality play that drained whatever remaining tension and eroticism built up in the earlier chapters (and began to falter mid-way through). With essentially no agency or active role in anything, Brandon being purely a passive victim elicits less sympathy than he really should given his dire circumstances. As for Joe, at first I felt he read as an abusive boyfriend, but towards the end he was just a vessel for the author to pour contempt into and not a character that could be feared and hated as much as the author intended. Rather than being a fearsome sadist or dominant master, Joe relies entirely on the invincible technology of the collar which allows the author to portray him as an oblivious nincompoop while still absolving Brandon of any agency to escape, fight back or defend himself. This absolutely killed the story for me. If a sub is trapped in a horrible situation from which there is no escape, then I as the reader expect the villain holding him to be smart, competent, powerful - something that justifies the situation. Instead this is off-loaded to an inanimate object and the result is deflating to the story. The resolution is unsatisfying and feels unearned. When Brandon was told about "The Resistance" I inwardly groaned because it immediately indicated two possibilities: Either the friend was lying and it was just a set-up to string Brandon along, or it meant that everything was going to be resolved purely through outside forces that appeared suddenly in the penultimate chapter. Both are bad ways to end the story because in the first instance, we've established that Joe is stupid and oblivious so there is no way he could anticipate that Brandon was suicidal, and the second is just the most boring kind of deus ex machina. I don't offer this criticism to slam the author, this is offered in good faith so that future efforts can be improved. The set-up and world-building was promising but the characters needed work. The villain needed to be less of a caricature, the protagonist needed something to do, and the ending was flawed and needed to be re-written.
Jun 7, 2022
6/10/22, 9:15 AM
Nice to have news from Officer Vhanel- I mean Skippy. ;) (I love this story, even if I usually am not a fan of puppies and ABDL. It's not my thing, but it doesn't bother me that much. So I get to enjoy this story.)
Jun 7, 2022
6/10/22, 3:16 AM
I WANT THIS DONE TO MEEEEEEEE
Jun 7, 2022
6/9/22, 11:08 AM
Sweet it's back ^_^