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6/17/22, 6:18 AM
Perhaps this was way too intense for me, I feel a little traumatized, but I suppose it means you narrated it exceptionally well, I read horror novels for fun but this scared me to a fundamental level, not sure why. I must congratulate you because it probably means this story is super good for the people who get off this. (Not trying to be disrespectful, but I felt I had to comment this)

6/17/22, 8:10 AM
@Kristalmaster Thank you for your feedback. I wanted to show Marcus's dark side, but i admit he takes it too far. I've gone through sh*t so i tend to lean dark. Next few chapters lightens up a bit i swear XD
6/17/22, 5:49 AM
I have to admit I was terrified reading this
Anonymous
6/16/22, 9:32 PM
0_0 thats intense, fun premise tho, keep it up!
6/16/22, 2:48 PM
Will he keep Stanley for himself?

6/16/22, 4:47 PM
@Jonanator Thats chapter 3 XD
D1p
6/16/22, 11:17 AM
Can't wait to read more! A very good set-up
6/15/22, 10:43 PM
SUPER excited to read more of this! 🤩
Anonymous
6/15/22, 10:20 PM
i hope this continues

6/15/22, 10:40 PM
@i have 9 chapters written i just need to clean them up a bit first
Anonymous
6/15/22, 10:08 PM
Fun set up, looking forward to the pay off

6/15/22, 10:40 PM
@i know its a slow build but i swear im going somewhere with this XD
6/15/22, 2:23 AM
Loved it 😁 really curious about the other 2 ladz
6/12/22, 7:15 AM
Wow! Is this your first story for the site? It's really well written. Great pacing, great descriptions. A fucked up fairy tale :grin:

Martin
6/14/22, 4:26 PM
@SyntheticHyacinth Have you figured out why you're struggling with uploading stories? That should not happen. Just make sure to NEVER use the browser back button when submitting a story.

Martin
6/14/22, 7:18 PM
@SyntheticHyacinth Thx, I'll check it out. Maybe there's a bug there...