Recent Comments

7/6/22, 12:58 AM
I’ve loved the story so far, but I’m not a fan of the permanent dumbing down if I’m honest. I do really like the idea of a temporary dumbing down during sex though. That idea really appeals to me. That being said, I think Carter should invest in ass upgrades or some kind of special ability (ideally one that would make any intelligence downgrades last only for the duration of sex).

7/6/22, 9:11 AM
@ls1999 I agree with the first part
7/5/22, 7:05 PM
Before this gets approved, is this meant to be a contest entry? If so I can add it to the contest for you.

7/6/22, 4:57 AM
@Norismo hey, sorry, yeah. It's a Toxic Masculinity entry. Must have forgot to check the box
7/5/22, 9:22 PM
I'm voting for the custom special ability to improve casting. I like that it's vague enough to have fun with. As for the story part of this, it's still hot, and I still want Rusty to get some comeuppance, but I've also changed my mind to have Carter retain some of what he's been given by Rusty. Especially since he's enjoying it. I'm curious if Rusty telling Dusty to get a Dom top perspective gave Dusty something more to work with to maybe take control of the situation. I'm also wondering how Rusty being both the GM and a player character will balance out. I can't imagine that this magic game won't try to rebalance things. Looking forward to where you take this next!
4/6/22, 5:30 AM
This was fantastic, even if Fenn’s voice in my head sounded like Basil Brush.
7/5/22, 6:53 AM
Your writing is amazing. Keeps you hooked at every angle and keeps you just wanting more. Very excited for what comes next.
7/4/22, 2:33 PM
[distant chanting slowly getting closer] ASS ASS ASS ASS ASS also holy shit broseph you're so fuckin' good at the wild intensity here, I'm takin' notes for sure 👀💖

7/5/22, 1:49 AM
@Cumguts Wow, thanks!
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7/4/22, 1:13 PM
All the changes done to Carter are things I love to see, but due to how sympatethic you made him I still want to see him get away from this with his core intact. Rusty doesnt deserve him. I vote for some spell casting abilities.

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@ Whoops! I might have miscalculated in my attempt to do something other than "homophobe jock gets turned out"...
7/4/22, 8:26 AM
Custom special ability!!! I love the creativity you have!!!!

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@Horn Thanks!
7/4/22, 3:17 AM
I’m loving this! Please keep going

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@Andavid Thanks! I'm waiting for votes, but I have a general idea for next chapter.
7/4/22, 1:48 AM
@Maskedhimbo oh I like that idea! Ass upgrade would be my vote too. I’m so conflicted! Love the changes Carter is going through, but I definitely don’t want to see Rusty winning in the end. By the way, this story has been awesome. Checks off so many boxes for me. Most of all, seeing this big (mostly) straight guy being converted into a needy, sub bottom is SO well written. Amazing character development!

7/5/22, 1:47 AM
@Phantom Passenger Thanks! I wonder if I made Rusty too much of a jerk and Carter too likable...