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Anonymous
6/23/22, 3:58 AM
i'm genuinely delighted by this series. while the sex is absolutely hot, your writing really shines particularly well in the characters and sense of humor. i'm so excited to see more!
6/23/22, 12:07 AM
This was sooo hot! More more of this! Would love to know where his parts went, what got sold and turned into what. Make it a series. I'd love to do this to some guys!!

6/23/22, 1:15 AM
@Hungryone4u thank you. I’m planning on tracking all the parts and pieces, but first we’re going to see how Martin got itself to being Maximized.
Evan
6/22/22, 11:42 PM
Quite a unique take and a fun one. Our protagonist definitely seems like the perfect support boy for the group. Quite a way to introduce themselves. Can't argue with the results. I think he's in for a very thorough spring break week.
Evan
6/22/22, 11:39 PM
I needed to edit this comment because I neglected to say that I have been eagerly anticipating the continuation of this story for quite a while, after having ravenously consumed all the previous chapters in rapid succession. Thus, I was delighted to learn it was posted. Thank you both for another great chapter. Now to the original comments: Such a web being woven. Distracting Marin was beautifully done, such a sensual and touching piece of writing. It is so very clear Calix cares for them. I do so enjoy how the two of you focus more on sense and feeling than the pure mechanics of sexual scenes. It makes each a delight. You both continue to unspool the threads while keeping a masterful hold of the tensions. Between factions like the crew and Anthix. Between Anthix and Rhys and just what will happen when the crew gets to talk with Jasper. How whatever happens reflects on the budding reconciliation between Anthix and Rhys. Who will find out what about what's been going on with Jasper and how that will appear without the full story? Rhys's caring for Jasper and his uncertainty as to whether he's being played is heartbreaking. As much as I want them to be well together, there is also the clear, honest connection with his old crew and Seth that - at the moment - looks mutually exclusive. The two of you create a twisted, thorny set of circumstances to navigate. The progression feels very natural and very clever ways of bringing information to the various parties and a nice continuation and fallout from Jasper and Rhys's expedition to the slums. The VR scene and its testing ground was nicely played. It felt very on theme and said a lot about the characters on both sides. I think it worked well to bridge a divide there more quickly than might have been done otherwise. Plus VR is fun. But damn you both, why can't Rhys and Jasper just be happy? :D
6/22/22, 9:35 PM
I really hope Mr G. gets what's coming to him! Drone 3.0
6/22/22, 3:41 PM
Jake is going to claim his own little toy in Cass…
Your closeted gay
6/22/22, 1:50 PM
I love that even though he is a demon, there's a romantic angle to it, and I hope this story explores it more
Anonymous
6/22/22, 3:24 AM
I've never commented on one of these before but the part > “Oh, master Flax” Misery looks me up and down “Is this to be a social visit?” The murky water gathers in her cheeks. Is she blushing?> I legit laughed out loud. That was gold. Solid writing
6/21/22, 9:59 PM
Gawd! A whole week of this? Would he / could he ever want to go back?

6/21/22, 10:45 PM
@Beaner I wouldn't ;P
6/21/22, 9:41 PM
ohohoho the plot thickens!!! really loving this series