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6/25/22, 2:20 PM
Ass Attributes, definitely!! And great work so far!

6/27/22, 12:59 AM
@Silvoid Thanks!
6/25/22, 9:16 AM
I'll vote for "Ask Rusty to give Carter some Ass Attribute points to solve the lube problem". It'd also be interesting to see how Rusty would change, though. I liked this part with Carter: “I don’t want to play with it at all, sir! Your cock is just a cock, sir, it’s actually super boring on its own? Like, who c-cares…” Carter stifled a moan as another surge of pleasure shot through his brain. Fuck, it felt good to do what he was told. He racked his brain for what else he could tell Rusty about what he wanted to do. “But I really want to follow your orders and get stretched out and ruined by it! Oh f-fuck it feels good to do what you said! Give me another order, please s-sir!” The idea of him not being interested in Rusty's big cock, but eager to obey anyway is funny, and I found it hot (although, uh, ... a little concerning of course), even though Rusty wasn't pleased!

6/27/22, 12:59 AM
@drummer Thanks! I had the idea that Carter wouldn't necessarily be into what Rusty's cock looked like but it was @Nutiper who really helped expand it here.
6/25/22, 2:32 AM
Get Rusty to make changes to his own sheet! I wanna see some comeuppance happen to him, and hoping for a redemption arc. I'm curious if Rusty could curse his own cock (since blessings can't be a negative) to jockify any guy bred by it.

6/27/22, 12:58 AM
@ChronoSeth I have some ideas in mind, but nothing set in stone yet.
6/25/22, 2:28 AM
A) This is hot as hell. B) My vote is: Suggest Rusty make some changes to Rusty’s own character sheet to solve the lube problem

6/27/22, 12:56 AM
@fanboi214 Thanks!
R P
6/25/22, 2:23 AM
Suggest Rusty make some changes to Rusty’s own character sheet to solve the lube problem The way you’ve written Carter getting into subbing is very hot! Nice to see hints that Dusty is plotting something 😈

6/27/22, 12:56 AM
@R P Thanks!
6/26/22, 8:19 PM
And the story with Jon and Theo goes on! I really LOVE this story! Hope there will be a lot of other sequels to this amazing roommates' adventures. Maybe one (or two...) of Jon's teammates can join them.
6/26/22, 5:08 PM
Either make changes to Carter or to Rusty. Carter could get the Ass Attribute to highlight his new status or Rusty can get can get an attribute to boost his dominance. But either way towards the goal of Carter staying submissive.
6/26/22, 5:04 PM
Oooh man. The way they're roping the narrator in is seriously HOT! And his internal tug-of-war -- between revulsion at how harsh they now are and arousal at his impending subjugation -- just perfect.
4/19/22, 9:54 AM
I love the "fine,I'll write it myself" energy. This is too good too! And cute and wholesome and hot too! I'm kinda wanting to see what type of cute shenanigans Theo would have!

6/26/22, 4:52 PM
@Curious53 Yeah! I really appreciate this "I'll write it myself"-attitude a lot! THANK YOU, Elmara!
6/26/22, 4:50 PM
Great sequel! I hope they miss their first period and experience something way more naughty together in their room, in the shower and anywhere else...:stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: