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Anonymous
7/3/22, 1:52 PM
Ass upgrades. Make it bubblier and able to drain power from Rusty
easdf
7/2/22, 10:05 PM
God I hate Rusty. I vote for Custom Special Ability as well. I want Carter to win and get out safe. I hate it when the bad guy wins and Carter deserves better than being dumbed down and forced to have another persona that he explicitly said he did not want multiple times. all I can hope for is that like many stories before, those who sin with Hubris will find the world turning on them, and in this case it is even shown in its original ancient Greece form.

7/3/22, 1:31 AM
@easdf I wasn't expecting literary references like this on my silly smut story...

easdf
7/3/22, 11:46 AM
@bluesuedewho I really like to analyze stories and movies πŸ˜…β€‹ In my opinion, adding elements from Greek tragedies without even trying is a great sign of talent!
7/2/22, 3:54 PM
Oh yes! Looks like my suggestion made it in, though thankfully with an option for Carter to take and win over Rusty. As far as I know, only the Character Carter gets his mind dumbed down, but in a way, Carter himself is safe and is simply forced to roleplay Character Carter. Hopefully. Sure he himself would probably be affected with his other half's dumber mind, but if he could just focus on being himself, he can make it. Custom Special Ability to improve casting. That seems like the option that would allow him to craft a Special Ability that could save him. Or he could purchase a Special Ability to become a monster.

7/2/22, 6:23 PM
@ChronoSeth Yeah, this, for sure. Improve his casting, I still want to see him find a way out, to outdo Rusty and trap him a bit more. Nobody said Rusty's own cum attributes couldn't affect himself, either. Could always end up eating Carter out after the fucking, accidentally triggering himself with it.

easdf
7/3/22, 11:37 AM
@ChronoSeth It's actually a great question. Do we know everything will go back to normal once the game ends? Also, how does the game end? Technically I guess Rusty, as the DM has the option of continuing the game forever therefore enslaving Carter (hopefully this won't be the case).
7/3/22, 8:14 AM
Looking forward to reading more of this. 😏

7/3/22, 10:42 AM
thanks for the support @NeedControlling i hope you'll enjoy where I'm going with this
Martin
7/3/22, 5:38 AM
Hot and cute!

7/3/22, 10:41 AM
thanks for the support @Martin :D
Anonymous
7/3/22, 6:05 AM
Since Carter is getting dumbed down, I think the easiest way for a dumb spellcaster to cast spell would be channelling mana through an already drawn spell formula, aka magical tattoos. Of course, D&D doesn't work that way, but it is one of the plausible route for him to continue the path of dumb spellcaster.
Anonymous
7/2/22, 5:53 PM
Unbelievably hot. Ass upgrades all day. Can’t be teasing them all chapter without going through with it!

7/3/22, 1:30 AM
@ Glad you liked it!
7/2/22, 5:21 PM
I vote for Custom Special Ability to improve casting for the same reason as ChronoSeth - I want Carter to "win" in the end, since Rusty is such a dick. Hopefully the dumbing down is temporary (just b/c it says "permanent" doesn't mean it can't be fixed by a new mechanic or spell) and Rusty gets his comeuppance

7/3/22, 1:30 AM
@AnonDragon Oh yeah, "permanent" functionally means those points don't come back after the original ability/spell/etc ends, not that future things can't change those stats.
7/2/22, 4:44 PM
FIrst another super hot chapter. Gotta love a small Dom/ big sub story and this one is delivering in spades. Second I'd say poor Carter is probably too dumb to use those points well. He probably knows that there could be a way out of this but can't figure what that could possibly be. Because when you're dumb and full of cum you just want more cock. Which makes me think he'd Grow Rusty's Dick.

7/3/22, 1:27 AM
@fanboi214 Thanks! I never dreamed I'd be writing small dom/big sub dynamics, so glad it's working for people!
7/3/22, 12:13 AM
Grow Rusty's dick