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Anonymous
7/4/22, 1:13 PM
All the changes done to Carter are things I love to see, but due to how sympatethic you made him I still want to see him get away from this with his core intact. Rusty doesnt deserve him. I vote for some spell casting abilities.

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@ Whoops! I might have miscalculated in my attempt to do something other than "homophobe jock gets turned out"...
7/4/22, 8:26 AM
Custom special ability!!! I love the creativity you have!!!!

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@Horn Thanks!
7/4/22, 3:17 AM
I’m loving this! Please keep going

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@Andavid Thanks! I'm waiting for votes, but I have a general idea for next chapter.
7/4/22, 1:48 AM
@Maskedhimbo oh I like that idea! Ass upgrade would be my vote too. I’m so conflicted! Love the changes Carter is going through, but I definitely don’t want to see Rusty winning in the end. By the way, this story has been awesome. Checks off so many boxes for me. Most of all, seeing this big (mostly) straight guy being converted into a needy, sub bottom is SO well written. Amazing character development!

7/5/22, 1:47 AM
@Phantom Passenger Thanks! I wonder if I made Rusty too much of a jerk and Carter too likable...
7/2/22, 10:08 PM
I think the custom special ability is the only option that might allow Carter to fight back. Rusty needs to be punished for his actions and Carter needs to be safe. On the last chapter I felt like there's a chance Dusty will help, and I think that will be very interesting and hot (loving dom tops are the best dom tops)

7/3/22, 1:32 AM
@Reader If you like loving dom tops, I think you might like my Magic Textbook story!

7/3/22, 11:48 AM
@bluesuedewho Ohhh yes please. I'll read it now!

7/3/22, 3:03 PM
About that, I can’t wait for the next chapter of Magic Textbook, man. Marc is my favorite character and I’ve been wanting for him to fuck the brains out of MC and I have a feeling this will happen in the next chapter. Please don’t take too long to post that :) cheers @bluesuedewho

7/5/22, 1:46 AM
@Elmara Thanks! I'm trying to get something written for the contest, but I do still have plans for Textbook.
7/3/22, 10:27 AM
Thanks for the chapter! I love multi-part curses like that "Dumb and Full of Cum" effect! My vote goes for ass upgrade.

7/5/22, 1:44 AM
@drummer Glad you like it! I enjoy squirmy curse stories, but this is basically the first one I've written.
7/3/22, 3:11 AM
Rusty has a lot in the tank, why should we choose? ;) Carter can grab a Custom Special Ability to improve casting early on, but when Rusty keeps pumping him full of more and more cum and his brains start to really give out, I think Carter’s going to invest HEAVY in ass upgrades. Besides, when he gets really dull he’s not going to know upgrading a 5 to a 6 is pushing his ass beyond human limitations… that’s a very exciting idea

7/5/22, 1:36 AM
@brium Plenty of XP, we'll have to see how Carter uses it!
7/3/22, 2:05 AM
I'd love to see the special custom ability! More chaos is always fun Also, this is just semantics, but isn't Rusty technically full of his own precum right now? I think he should also take those hits to mental stats /j

7/5/22, 1:34 AM
@gargayle Oooh, the ability specifies targeted character! Otherwise, yes, Rusty would be totally braindead really fast. And I agree, more chaos is fun.
7/4/22, 5:32 AM
Grow rustys dick!!!
7/3/22, 8:10 PM
I liked the world-building you wove into the story, as you have with other stories. This would make for a good sci-fi premise, with or without Agent 88's erotic adventures as the fat, mustachioed consort of a handsome tycoon with an appetite for hefty older gentlemen. Age progression stories have always fascinated me, but they usually end with the young man forlorn and fat, mourning the loss of his youth and gym-toned physique. Your characters see their fate as a new door that's been opened, as they find enjoyment in their new forms. The story keeps going after he gets old and fat, and he finds real happiness. I have Silver's taste in men as well, and the sex between him and 88 is really well written. TLDR: Dystopian Grandpa Erotica Done Right.

7/3/22, 11:27 PM
@The Sugar Cat I get that there's satisfaction in the humiliation of a young arrogant man, but I never enjoyed those kinds of endings. I can't see it as anything other than a good thing, I suppose I am too infatuated old bears to see the negatives. Thank you for you kind words.

7/4/22, 12:52 AM
@BigMetalHusband The humiliation angle is there and I do love it....so much media is about cocky young upstarts making fools of the clueless old guys, and AP/WG stories are a refreshing pie in the face. Agent 88 comes across as a nihilistic, macho antihero, and the royal guards are like so many other larger than life fantasy heroes. These stories make bumbling fools of them, and they find out too late that they are in over their heads, but end up being taken under the wing of stern father figures who show them the errors of their ways. That's how it goes for a lot of men as they get older, and they look back on their youth with a mix of nostalgia and embarrassment.