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7/7/22, 5:14 AM
I had no idea what it meant, I thought it meant Entirely New Man, as in 'after this experience you're a new man'. Hence the problem with acronyms. Thank you all for the food for thought though it's been rather entertaining
7/6/22, 11:54 AM
Soooooo... What is enm? Acronyms are great and all, but not when they can mean 1,000 things.

7/6/22, 12:30 PM
@Papa Werebear Ethical Non-Monogomy, I believe.

7/6/22, 1:00 PM
@Norismo Thank you very much! I appreciate that.

Anonymous
7/6/22, 10:25 PM
@Norismo Thanks for clearing that up, I've been wondering if that's what it meant, or if it stood for embarrassed naked male, lol

Anonymous
7/7/22, 1:30 AM
@norismo @papawerebear I see I've sparked some confusion. I interpreted enm to be embarrassed naked male, although thanks @norismo for letting me learn something new. Might look into ethical non monogamy 🙂
7/6/22, 7:54 PM
That was fun 😄
7/6/22, 7:51 PM
Just a heads up to the author, I had to put in a quick fix to this story because it got accidentally added as a second chapter to an unrelated story from 2020. Apologies to any excessive e-mails you may have received as I worked on the fix! It should be all good now, though. (And adding this note here, too, for any readers who may have been confused by seeing a two-chapter story in the contest.)
7/6/22, 12:08 PM
Awesome. Really enjoyed this.
7/4/22, 2:41 PM
I loved this story. The slow spiral bringing Riley down is so well described/written. Well done.

7/6/22, 9:46 AM
thanks @Nephilim i hope to get around to finishing the next chapter within a few days (but I said the same about Bella's Pastoral Life chapter 2, too!)
7/6/22, 12:58 AM
I’ve loved the story so far, but I’m not a fan of the permanent dumbing down if I’m honest. I do really like the idea of a temporary dumbing down during sex though. That idea really appeals to me. That being said, I think Carter should invest in ass upgrades or some kind of special ability (ideally one that would make any intelligence downgrades last only for the duration of sex).

7/6/22, 9:11 AM
@ls1999 I agree with the first part
7/5/22, 7:05 PM
Before this gets approved, is this meant to be a contest entry? If so I can add it to the contest for you.

7/6/22, 4:57 AM
@Norismo hey, sorry, yeah. It's a Toxic Masculinity entry. Must have forgot to check the box
7/5/22, 9:22 PM
I'm voting for the custom special ability to improve casting. I like that it's vague enough to have fun with. As for the story part of this, it's still hot, and I still want Rusty to get some comeuppance, but I've also changed my mind to have Carter retain some of what he's been given by Rusty. Especially since he's enjoying it. I'm curious if Rusty telling Dusty to get a Dom top perspective gave Dusty something more to work with to maybe take control of the situation. I'm also wondering how Rusty being both the GM and a player character will balance out. I can't imagine that this magic game won't try to rebalance things. Looking forward to where you take this next!
4/6/22, 5:30 AM
This was fantastic, even if Fenn’s voice in my head sounded like Basil Brush.