Recent Comments

7/15/22, 1:33 AM
Love this story. So much detail it was so visual in my mind. Would love to see more of your work.

7/16/22, 3:16 AM
@Titan Thanks... Glad you enjoyed it. I've been working on a new story, but can't seem to find the time to finish it.
Jul 13, 2022
7/15/22, 3:25 AM
Jack, a muscle bottom is a great find, especially when he doesn't know he's a bottom yet. Look at John, he had no idea.
Jul 13, 2022
7/14/22, 4:03 PM
This was a great read! Love that even though the boy got big he still feels like a defenseless boy and his old bully and his younger brother can take such easy advantage of it. Love that Aiden is able to make him find his muscle bottom side too! Wonder if they'll try to make their muscle boy even bigger and his insecurity and submission keep increasing with his muscle mass
Andrew
7/14/22, 9:19 AM
Putting my money on Victor finally prospering and you can throw me to Mr Grey and his helpers if I'm wrong! Really love this series, it's such a good idea.
Charlie
7/13/22, 7:57 PM
There's one paragraph repeated twice, sloppy editing.

7/14/22, 5:58 AM
@Charlie two different endings sharing the same preamble, intentional in this case.
Jul 13, 2022
Evan
7/14/22, 2:02 AM
The idea that Aiden opened up Scott while he was unconscious to help him take his dick and lubed him is actually pretty hot. And makes the pleasure as a tool to dominate him and have a cock in him all the better. No pain to highlight any resistance or doubts.
Jul 13, 2022
7/13/22, 9:01 PM
The style is the usual awesome and sex scenes great but I'm just not into victims getting victimized again. When a character is degraded the way Scott was, it's hotter when it's their karma.

7/13/22, 9:03 PM
@THAT Steve I agree but this was what the client wanted.

7/13/22, 9:44 PM
@Jack Parker We probably don’t see eye to eye on this, but I think this is a great story. I don’t see Scott(y) as anything other than a victim of his current circumstance. That Aiden awakens - triggers?- something inside of him that Scott didn’t realize was there, was hot to read. Kudos.