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7/22/22, 5:20 PM
I'm assuming that they mind wipe the men when they finish their sentences? This is if they are actually allowed to leave. In the US the 8th Amendment prohibits cruel and unusual punishment. There's no way any men who were allowed to leave would not tell the news media. This is why I'm guessing they mind wipe them.

7/22/22, 7:55 PM
@Cutlerfan Oh I was just assuming that somehow the ones that go here never get released. Fraudulent reports of bad behavior, accidents etc.

Evan
7/22/22, 11:31 PM
@Cutlerfan While this isn't the U.S. you are right that it would be inevitable that word would get out when prisoners are released without some sort of intervention. There are a number of ways to deal with that. Mindwiping is, indeed, one option at their disposal. But, it isn't the only one.

Evan
7/22/22, 11:36 PM
@Nocturne13 You have pointed out another possibility as to how the knowledge of what happens in these private prison ships - who need fuel for an advantage in their trading - can hold on to prisoners or stop the truth of their experience finding the light of day. In Phil's case, though. I wonder what you think would happen when the year of his sentence is up. This experience has definitely changed him and only in a few days. What would a year be like? Would he want to leave? Would the sentence being up be something dreaded rather than anticipated? He's an amp now and knows what that is like. Would he want to go back to being a man in the world with all the troubles and pressures that entails? Not to mention the lack of regular heights of pleasure on a near daily basis.
7/22/22, 3:15 PM
Holy shit that was incredibly hot! The arc of the scene was really well drawn, from resisting to submitting, each stage was super hot

Evan
7/22/22, 11:28 PM
@Bound_Up_Boy Thank you! Thank you, too, for commenting. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and that it perhaps pushed some of your buttons.
7/22/22, 2:30 PM
What I especially love about this story is how inexorable all the other characters know that it is, and how Phil seems to find that fascinating. I love Cho for his firm kindness and Cortez for how he contrasts that. My favourite line from Cortez is him sadistically declaring his love for bathtime while he sprays them down. And then there's the lore!!! I love the language you've chosen -- battery pack, amp, and so on, and how much it evokes. I would love to read more stories set in this universe! Thank you so much!

Evan
7/22/22, 11:27 PM
@time.to.occur Thank you. Your encouragement and kindness helped make this a finished story and far more polished than it ever would have been. I think Phil, like all of them at one point, were fascinated by the expectation of the inexorable nature of it. That the others had to put effort in to remember his point of view, being new to it all. Every new arrival probably finds that strange. Every new arrival believes that the cellmates are all wrong. They will be the exception. They'll put up with what they must and be on their way unchanged. They are always wrong. I enjoy the bath time line too. It's when we see Cortez at his happiest, I think. If I write more stories in this universe, then I promise to share.
7/22/22, 10:37 PM
In my personal opinion, it would be interesting to define a definitive style and not have to read two versions or modified versions of the previous ones.

7/22/22, 11:23 PM
@Maxigay I can understand this. I grew up in the 80's and a big style of book I read growing up were these small "choose your own adventure" style of book and at the end of a page it would say Go to Page # to do this... or page # to do that. This is something like that. What I can tell you though is that if you picture this as a flow chart, everything from 1 is going to be "willing" and everything derived from 2 is forced, the further you go "to the right" will be more forced and vice versa. So higher letters are more forced, A and B more willing. I hope you've been able to enjoy the story either way and thank you for the feedback.
7/22/22, 9:25 PM
The buildup was good, but 3 sentences of the sex was a bit of a downer, longer sex scenes would make it better
Anonymous
7/22/22, 6:56 AM
Always thought I was gay but nope. My types are hot guys and Dommy Mommys
Gingcub
7/21/22, 5:30 PM
Fucking love it! Would love to see him strapped down and milked so he goes all the way to a permanent nub on his last day 😈
7/21/22, 5:45 AM
Wow!! Definitely would like to read more of this! 🤩

SavSubRed
7/21/22, 4:02 PM
@NeedControlling Thanks, hopefully I'll have time to get on that soon.
7/21/22, 12:02 AM
ContInue?

SavSubRed
7/21/22, 4:01 PM
@Maxigay Yeah, possibly, I've got an idea for another part.
Hypnominion
7/19/22, 5:45 PM
I'm also voting for 2B; the only reason that I rated it the way that I did was, in the initial part of the chapter, the author ws explicit about the character's origins in the Midwestern US, but kept consistently using British terminology, which took me out pf the story; it got better, later, however, and I found myself intrigued and more than a little turned on. Well done.

7/21/22, 4:05 AM
@Hypnominion My reasoning on that was that he's been in the UK for 6 months and he's telling his story from a point of looking back at his experience. He's going to know the majority of the basic terms at minimum after 6 months. Also when you're going to move someplace you probably do a bit of research. I'm sorry it took you out of the story a bit though. It appears you're enjoying it otherwise. Thank you fro the feedback so far.