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7/29/22, 4:21 AM
Fantastic!! Please continue!!
WillingSoldier
7/28/22, 9:52 PM
I'm loving this. When will it continue?
7/28/22, 8:53 AM
Oh, this twisted story of the father-son bond really excites me. I liked the way the protagonist's despair was combined with the happiness of seeing his father again.
7/28/22, 8:43 AM
The story of a young handsome agent transforming into an old, hairy, bald, ugly underclass and sexually surrendering... There were so many elements in this story that I loved, it was almost mind-boggling. Thanks for writing a great story.
Lavender Lad
7/28/22, 2:14 AM
The description of the memories being changed and him helplessly trying to resist was very hot
7/27/22, 8:24 PM
Hot story! Love the mantra of repeating “Hair hair hair” as he grows hairier. Will it be continued?
7/3/22, 6:20 AM
Maybe it's just the gamer in me, but couldn't Carter just use the XP to buy back the mental stas and still have a bunch of points left? The triple refund means you could absolutely abuse this to hell and back in buffing up your character sheet.

7/5/22, 1:41 AM
@SageKepler He certainly could (and I have notes on this for the next chapter), but powergaming is going to get harder for Carter as his mental stats go down and carnal temptations go up! It's easy to rationalize spending those points on fun things when more triple XP is coming eventually.

7/5/22, 8:32 AM
@bluesuedewho I think Carter could buy back the stats he lost and still has leftover XP for whatever else he wants to buy, in that way he could indeed stall the loss of his primary Intelligence stat and still get other stats. If it works like duping his Exp, then he could just play the part of becoming dumber while buying more stuff from the duplication glitch.

easdf
7/5/22, 1:02 PM
@ChronoSeth I like that idea. Tricking Rusty while playing his game

7/27/22, 6:00 AM
@SageKepler to get around that, Rusty could also just order submissive Carter to unwillingly spend his xp on attributes
5/29/22, 8:25 PM
Please continue this story

7/27/22, 4:02 AM
@Italianjoker, @JR, @BenConners12 Thank you for the reviews. I don't normally write gay stories, so this was a fun challenge for me. I'm probably not going to continue this (honestly, I really just wrote it because I'm very eager to read the other Draco Malfoy story on this site and got tired of waiting). I have other HP fanficiton on other sites that are m/f, bi-curious and follow similar themes though.
Anonymous
7/26/22, 5:55 PM
I check back every day for the next chapter :) can't wait to see Carter lose more intelligence, more sexual attributes getting leveled up (carter's ass/"love nut"/ass hunger, going "beyond human limits," all while making Carter beg for it all), more obedience commands, and dusty slowly taking over *drool emoji x 3* truly, such an amazing piece of work from bluesuede (as always)