Recent Comments

R P
7/3/22, 2:44 AM
I vote Custom Special Ability. I’m still rooting for Dusty to come out on top, and I’m sure he has some great suggestions for what spells Carter could cast to make the scene hotter (and make sure it’s filmed from a dom/top perspective 😉) This another great chapter, seeing Carter get in to bottoming is very hot. Even if I don’t want him to be stuck as a dumb jock forever, it’s fun for the moment.

7/5/22, 1:35 AM
@R P Thanks! I wonder if I made Carter too likable by accident... I just wanted to do something other than the classic "homophobe jock gets turned out" but I may have created a monster.

R P
7/5/22, 6:49 AM
@bluesuedewho Haha! Subby Carter is a lot of fun, but he is so likeable (and Rusty is such a dick) that it feels bad to let Rusty have it all go his way. I think Dusty shows that Rusty has potential to be a more likeable dom, and it’d be fun to see Rusty tricked into some personality changes of his own.

easdf
7/5/22, 1:17 PM
@bluesuedewho I'll tell you what, I think the issue lies in two points: 1. Carter didn't do anything to deserve to be punished; his wishes are completely reasonable and he has been nice and considerate, so being used by rusty (pun intended) feels unfair and we root for him. Also Rusty's a dick 2. I think that dumbing down is a less popular fetish as it seems. If I try to put my finger on it, in my own personal opinion, it's because dumbing down is effecting both the character's personality and their agency. These stakes combining what I said on point 1, makes the protagonist-villain contrast more polarized. Having said all that, I don't think this is necessarily a bad thing. High stakes are suspenseful and even though it is less my thing I can't wait to see what happens next. It only means that people want Carter to come out on top (and safe) and to Rusty paying his price.

easdf
7/5/22, 1:17 PM
@easdf Wow, this ended up way longer than I intended

7/29/22, 12:39 PM
@easdf My problem with #1 is that like, almost no one deserves something like MC to happen them in real life. It would be the worst thing to ever happen to you. When people try to moralize in MC story it is an immediate turn off like "okay dude I get it, you didn't think the moral implications through and thought that one guy being kinda homophobic is on the same level as being stripped of your will and personality. Call me when you can just focus on writing a hot story." Like anyone who would do MC is a dick. Whether a story acknowledges it or not, it is an immutable fact.
7/29/22, 4:21 AM
Fantastic!! Please continue!!
WillingSoldier
7/28/22, 9:52 PM
I'm loving this. When will it continue?
7/28/22, 8:53 AM
Oh, this twisted story of the father-son bond really excites me. I liked the way the protagonist's despair was combined with the happiness of seeing his father again.
7/28/22, 8:43 AM
The story of a young handsome agent transforming into an old, hairy, bald, ugly underclass and sexually surrendering... There were so many elements in this story that I loved, it was almost mind-boggling. Thanks for writing a great story.
Lavender Lad
7/28/22, 2:14 AM
The description of the memories being changed and him helplessly trying to resist was very hot
7/27/22, 8:24 PM
Hot story! Love the mantra of repeating “Hair hair hair” as he grows hairier. Will it be continued?
7/3/22, 6:20 AM
Maybe it's just the gamer in me, but couldn't Carter just use the XP to buy back the mental stas and still have a bunch of points left? The triple refund means you could absolutely abuse this to hell and back in buffing up your character sheet.

7/5/22, 1:41 AM
@SageKepler He certainly could (and I have notes on this for the next chapter), but powergaming is going to get harder for Carter as his mental stats go down and carnal temptations go up! It's easy to rationalize spending those points on fun things when more triple XP is coming eventually.

7/5/22, 8:32 AM
@bluesuedewho I think Carter could buy back the stats he lost and still has leftover XP for whatever else he wants to buy, in that way he could indeed stall the loss of his primary Intelligence stat and still get other stats. If it works like duping his Exp, then he could just play the part of becoming dumber while buying more stuff from the duplication glitch.

easdf
7/5/22, 1:02 PM
@ChronoSeth I like that idea. Tricking Rusty while playing his game

7/27/22, 6:00 AM
@SageKepler to get around that, Rusty could also just order submissive Carter to unwillingly spend his xp on attributes
5/29/22, 8:25 PM
Please continue this story

7/27/22, 4:02 AM
@Italianjoker, @JR, @BenConners12 Thank you for the reviews. I don't normally write gay stories, so this was a fun challenge for me. I'm probably not going to continue this (honestly, I really just wrote it because I'm very eager to read the other Draco Malfoy story on this site and got tired of waiting). I have other HP fanficiton on other sites that are m/f, bi-curious and follow similar themes though.