Recent Comments

8/8/22, 10:12 AM
hey, great, development is faster and faster. TOP! LOVE IT
8/8/22, 5:29 AM
Amazing stuff. Can't wait for more!
8/7/22, 7:05 PM
Thank you, it has taken a while to develop.
8/7/22, 7:02 PM
Ohh I like this~ especially when he forces the boy into his armpits
8/7/22, 4:53 PM
Love 4A. I prefer the protagonist to be willing to change, instead of being forced to.
8/7/22, 4:43 PM
Oh wow what a twist! What s great story to continue =)
Anon
8/5/22, 5:42 PM
Hi! I just wanted to let you know that there are quite a few typos in the story summary, and thatโ€™s likely making people not bother reading it since itโ€™s the first exposure they get to the story. No shame here, but it might be a good idea to go back and edit the summary

apollo
8/6/22, 1:44 PM
@Anon oh thanks for the advice. i'll try to fix them
8/3/22, 2:36 AM
Hot Damn! Well written. Please continue. I want to hear how this angels became dominated and taken. Because they have some kinky overlords as masters.

8/3/22, 4:04 AM
@Marik29 That is altogether too kind of you. Believe me, this is simply the beginning. I have big plans for the rise of the Over-Master. Any kinks you'd particularly welcome?

8/3/22, 8:37 PM
@AngelSpanker, you have already hit on a few: Dominating, subjugation/enslavement, chasity, toys (dildo). And it seems a lot of these enslaved angels are muscular which is another big hit! And please keep 'sexualizing' a lot of what the angels must do. Like how this one had to sit on a dildo that seemed to have a mind of its own just to right in a book. I would recommend expanding the use of toys and gear such as collars, leash, leather/rubber, hoods, gags, etc. I'm really eager to read how they submitted and went through their conditioning. What do you think?

8/3/22, 8:42 PM
@Marik29 We seem to be of one mind. I like how you think. This is going to be a bit of a history, so I don't want to give too much away. Suffice it to say, it will definitely involve a _(lot)_ of haughty, stuck-up angelic tossers getting put in their place. If that means that legendary heroes and supreme warriors are humiliated, owned, and spanked until they cry, then so much the better.

8/3/22, 8:56 PM
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฟ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฟ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฟ@Marik29

8/4/22, 6:02 AM
@AngelSpanker @Marik29 This looks very nice. Me likes it a lot! This prologue by itself made me very hard (and would have made me cum If I hadn't refrained from it) and the kinks listed in this comment line are very nice too. Please please please keep on writing.

8/4/22, 7:40 AM
@Nephilim How kind of you to say! If I've gotten at always one person going, it hasn't been time wasted. And good on you for the restraint.

8/5/22, 8:22 PM
Also tattoos@U.K. guy
8/5/22, 5:15 PM
Will this be continued? I'd love to read what happens to this new rubber slave!