Recent Comments

8/17/22, 5:04 PM
AHHH! I hate it when I read about a fun mmorpg that does not exist! So, well done on your part! Overall, I really like how fleshed out all the characters are. I actually started grinning as it dawned on Finn who he was getting tips from. And of course, quite the hot scene we (almost) got there, looking forward to more. Keep it up! :)

8/17/22, 5:12 PM
@xentiornes I promise it's going to be an awesome MMO...!
8/16/22, 12:32 AM
Hot hot hot. Some brotherly pain sluttery and humiliation please!!!

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:09 PM
@Coq au Vin, thanks! Erik and Eli’s punishment is up next, no worries!
8/15/22, 4:35 PM
YEEEEEEEEEEES! Mac and Dad playing with each other was something I was hoping for,having them mindless while doing so was an added bonus. Now I'm waiting for the Doc and the Cop to come home

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:08 PM
@ForgottenCradle, I’m so happy to hear that! I definitely had a blast writing this chapter, so I’m glad it’s so well loved in return. Erik and Eli’s much anticipated punishment will begin next chapter. It might take me a little longer because I’m a perfectionist and i want their first torture session to live up to the wait thus far :)
8/15/22, 1:39 PM
Are we going to see the brothers, especially in their uniforms? Dying to see that!!

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:05 PM
@uniformeddandy, absolutely! As a cop, Erik has more of a uniform than Doc Kingston, and i plan to have some fun with that.
8/15/22, 10:49 AM
It's getting better anf better man, nice. I really hope vince make them act and think like they are vince's wife.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@TimDrake22, I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
8/15/22, 7:49 AM
Amazing job can’t wait for the chapter

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@Diyù, thanks so much!
Iriefal
8/15/22, 7:43 AM
Yeeey, another one, thank you. Can't w8 what he will do with Sam(?). His father's friend when he comes to "solve" problem

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:01 PM
@Iriefal, you’re most welcome! I wont spoil anything, but needless to say, Sam’s in for a rough ride ;)
8/15/22, 6:57 AM
I'm really quite enjoying the dark edge to this story. It's not often you see hypnosis twisting a person, bringing out their darkness. Mac seems like a loose cannon, perfect for smashing a detailed plan to pieces.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 5:00 PM
@Norismo, thank you so much! I’m happy to hear you’re enjoying the story. A loose cannon is an excellent way of describing Mac. He’s been a lot of fun to write so far and i look forward to messing with him and all the rest of the Kingstons in the future!
8/17/22, 2:44 PM
Omg the slow burn that I didn’t know I needed. The wait was definitely worth it. love it!

8/17/22, 3:07 PM
@Curious53 That's awesome! Also thank you for reminding me that I meant to tag it slow burn. 😅
Anonymous
8/17/22, 12:47 PM
This is both hot and delightful! I hope this more character-rich addition means you've found some inspiration; it has always left me itching for more. Now that you've tossed so many interesting plates in the air I can't wait to see where you take it. Very hot, very charming. Love the parallel of Jack thinking Finn outclasses his avatar, and Finn thinking Jack is the bigger stud in-game. Rada's "intimidating roommate" act is also interestingly subtle. Give all these nerds get a happy ending!

8/17/22, 1:34 PM
Thanks. I'm glad you found all of those things interesting!