Recent Comments

8/25/22, 12:20 PM
I’m really digging the slow burn! It has me curious what’s happening mentally in Jack and Finn, and I’m also curious about the parallels between the MMO Jack plays and what Rada plays. I’m sure you’re drawing out something fiendishly clever and I’m looking forward to it!
8/16/22, 9:15 AM
Simple by your standards, but interesting and well executed as always. Mac's dark personality is an interesting point here and letting him act that way is foolhardy to say the least. It could be the undoing of our protagonist Vincent, if you asked me.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 6:13 PM
@Sexcrab, I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Mac’s a wild card for sure and will definitely make things even more interesting down the line.

8/24/22, 6:51 AM
@Blackjinx123 Honestly, I wouldn't mind one bit if the next chapter was a filler where nothing happens but Emit and Mac using their sexy daddy bodies to seduce Vince as they vie for their young master's attention. So much that I, like many people on this site, like the "daddy slave" theme. But I know you have an agenda and this series, despite being very well written, has a slow pace. And I also want to see the Vince's brothers' punishment and Sam's downfall, despite my preferencies. Although this could happen in between seeing the suffering of the brothers at work. Hmm....
Anonymous
8/24/22, 5:29 AM
You're a perverted genius. Loved this years ago and love it better now.
Anonymous
8/22/22, 1:32 AM
I'm loving this chapter.
8/21/22, 6:41 AM
Reading this gave me a boner!
8/21/22, 6:40 AM
This is one of my favourite series. I hope to see where it goes. Thanks for writing and sharing :heart:
8/18/22, 6:02 AM
Fantastic chapter! Jack sounds so real, you've really done an amazing job in characterization. And just when things were about to get heated... you got them gaming together! So awesome! I love how Finn is slowly falling for insecure Jack but how Jack is the boss in-game. Which, incidentally, was also very interestingly fleshed out, cheers to that too! I hope you keep going, this is such a cute story, and Rada is sure to complicate it interestingly.

8/21/22, 1:52 AM
@Essex Knowing the characterization is working for people is really gratifying. I was a little worried the swerve works bother people but I'm uh... edging my readers. Look forward to a fun twist next part.
8/18/22, 4:09 AM
This story is the wish I didn’t know i needed. It rubs my lamp in all the right ways. I usually hate a slow burn but I love the focus on the characters so much that I am fine with letting you edge me. Thank you and I am excited for what comes next.

8/21/22, 1:51 AM
@Unruly Dogboy Thank you! Means a lot.
8/17/22, 8:08 PM
Really, really enjoying this. 😛😛😛

8/21/22, 1:51 AM
@NeedControlling thanks!
Anonymous
8/20/22, 7:22 PM
When can we expect the next chapter? :pray: :pray: