Recent Comments

8/26/22, 3:27 PM
I'm not into slow burns. This story is like my candles. I am enjoying the time with your characters. I hope you continue. This chapter was not that long. I felt it helped give me a perspective of where this story is headed. Loved it.
Aug 24, 2022
8/26/22, 1:01 PM
I understand.
6/14/22, 6:29 AM
The story is so good that there is no second chapter? I'm so looking forward to it!

Martin
6/14/22, 4:29 PM
@kantt Thank you so much. It means a lot to me that people like this story. I had written a second chapter but I didn't like it at all. So I have to start from scratch, but knowing that people want to read more about this is certainly a good incentive for me!

6/17/22, 1:46 AM
@Martin Thank you and I look forward to your new work!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

8/24/22, 10:04 PM
@Martinez definitely want to read more!

Martin
8/26/22, 11:05 AM
@Pakibttm Thanks. I had so many plans for this and got stuck… A vacation is coming up, let’s hope I’ll find the muse to continue some old series of mine…
Steve McBeezelbub
8/26/22, 1:45 AM
Not to rush you or anything but I DESPERATELY NEED MORE INSTALLMENTS OF THIS HOT, SILLY SERIES!!!!! That's all.
8/25/22, 2:03 PM
God I wish I was Markus!

8/25/22, 5:29 PM
@Dorsetsleaze Your not the only one :eyes:
8/24/22, 8:50 PM
Omg that was so hot!!!!!

8/25/22, 1:00 PM
@James Heller Thanks. I'm glad you think so. 😊
8/25/22, 12:20 PM
I’m really digging the slow burn! It has me curious what’s happening mentally in Jack and Finn, and I’m also curious about the parallels between the MMO Jack plays and what Rada plays. I’m sure you’re drawing out something fiendishly clever and I’m looking forward to it!
8/16/22, 9:15 AM
Simple by your standards, but interesting and well executed as always. Mac's dark personality is an interesting point here and letting him act that way is foolhardy to say the least. It could be the undoing of our protagonist Vincent, if you asked me.

Blackjinx123
8/17/22, 6:13 PM
@Sexcrab, I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Mac’s a wild card for sure and will definitely make things even more interesting down the line.

8/24/22, 6:51 AM
@Blackjinx123 Honestly, I wouldn't mind one bit if the next chapter was a filler where nothing happens but Emit and Mac using their sexy daddy bodies to seduce Vince as they vie for their young master's attention. So much that I, like many people on this site, like the "daddy slave" theme. But I know you have an agenda and this series, despite being very well written, has a slow pace. And I also want to see the Vince's brothers' punishment and Sam's downfall, despite my preferencies. Although this could happen in between seeing the suffering of the brothers at work. Hmm....
Anonymous
8/24/22, 5:29 AM
You're a perverted genius. Loved this years ago and love it better now.
Anonymous
8/22/22, 1:32 AM
I'm loving this chapter.