Recent Comments

fantassdick
9/3/22, 1:21 PM
This is absolutely divine. The institutional/prison setting. The contrasting tenderness of Cho and severity of Cortez. Phil's defiant (but misguided) belief that he will be able to resist treatment. You should totally dig into this setting as a series. Escape attempts, failed sentencing appeals, dynamics between Chargers and manimals, family visits to the prison, etc... a goldmine. Keep up the awesome work!

Evan
9/11/22, 4:31 AM
@fantassdick Thank you so much for taking the time to write this. And for the praise, I appreciate it. I am delighted you enjoyed it. Cho and Cortez's contrast is one of my favourite parts of it so I'm glad that resonated with you too. Your ideas for digging into the series are excellent. I hadn't thought about escape attempts but that could make for an interesting lens. Food for thought. Thank you again!
9/10/22, 10:56 PM
Oh no that's so messed up! I'm so sorry to hear that! I'd do anything to have more of this story. It really speaks to me!
9/10/22, 10:41 PM
OMG please write more! I was hanging on ever word.
Anonymous
9/9/22, 9:14 AM
This was absolutely amazing! I could almost smell the musk!
9/9/22, 5:49 AM
Great story!
TdC
9/9/22, 5:47 PM
Great story and a novel take on the form. Can't wait to see what else you post!
9/9/22, 5:57 AM
Loved it! I hope there is more!
9/8/22, 5:02 PM
Would like to read more like this…..interesting story…..very well done in my opinion…..I like it…..can’t wait to read what’s next…..
9/8/22, 12:24 AM
just like mike: I need more :drooling_face: