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bucke
10/8/22, 12:15 AM
Can't believe there is only one more part left. I'm greedy for more. I love it because while I can predict somewhat what will happen next, some other aspects I have no idea how you will end it so am very excited for the last part, but also sad that it'll be the end. I know you said after the end you didn't really see a way to continue, but do you plan on writing more here? I love your stuff and I feel like this more uniform/military aspect is not as common to see on this site.

10/8/22, 4:43 AM
@bucke I hope I leave you wanting more but also satisfied with the ending. And I do plan on writing more, I already have the first part of another story (also military themed) written and I might post it as I write it which will mean long periods between chapters but also that readers can help inspire what comes next in some ways. We'll have to see how that comes. But yes I enjoy both military and uniforms so they will be strong themes for me.
Zero
10/7/22, 2:43 PM
ooh interesting are we gonna see both brothers fall under the sway of the commander?

10/7/22, 10:23 PM
@Zero One more part to find out
10/7/22, 7:02 PM
I love the story 7 you're a very gifted writer. I will reserve my comments until I get to the most recent chapter.
10/7/22, 4:38 AM
Maybe my biggest question at the moment is to think what position Scott, Alex's brother, is in this whole story. And what will he do when he realizes that his brother is spiraling into submission for a guy they both think is hot and nothing else. What will Scott do about the spell cast? I also love how dynamic and agile this story is, but without being lacking in hot scenes and character development. It's a great series, even with few chapters. Waiting for full moon.

10/7/22, 4:50 AM
@Sexcrab Scott was interesting, his main roll is to be the outside view to see the changes in Alex. Beyond that I went back and fourth between a few ideas before finally setting on his final version. Chapter 4 see him making a larger roll but you'll have to wait for it to be approved to find out what he does. And thank you I am glad you're enjoying it.
bucke
10/7/22, 12:03 AM
This is amazing. Waiting excitedly for the last two parts. Sad it can't go on forever with the way this is developing.

10/7/22, 12:13 AM
@bucke I'm glad you're enjoying it but you're right, the story has a very hard end with part 5. there isn't a plan or even a good way to continue the story after that point. But I hope the last two parts live up to your expectations
10/6/22, 7:17 PM
Between you and this story and Happy Ending's "A Break From the Monotony", I'm getting lessons on how to do the whole submitting to the commanding officer scene. Honestly, I wanted to be in Alex's position the way you set the scene up. Truly looking forward to the next episode.

10/6/22, 11:58 PM
@New Guy in Town “A Break From the Monotony” is great and I love how realistic and slow its building up. This story is moving much faster and clearly isn't realistic but at the moment Petrekka doesn't know that. he's counting himself very luck and wants them both to have a good time training Alex to be the best he can be. Also being in Petrekka position is a lot of fun.
Anonymous
10/6/22, 5:36 PM
OMG amazing.

10/6/22, 11:54 PM
@ Thank you
10/6/22, 3:53 AM
Magic, like wishes, can have unforeseen consequences; it is fundamentally speaking your intentions into the universe but the universe isn't as astute in catching the nuances of language. And this fundamentally sets up the events that play out. I'm looking forward to the way things play out.

10/6/22, 11:52 PM
@New Guy in Town I hope you enjoy how they play out because yes, unforeseen consequences can happen very easily if you're to horny to really think about what you're doing.
10/6/22, 3:26 AM
Luke Petrekka is a naturally dominating guy and the spell doesn't specify that the target becomes submissive to the caster. I think we already know what this will lead to, I really want to see it.

10/6/22, 11:51 PM
@Sexcrab Very good points and you're right Petrekka is very used to being in charge. I hope it lives up to your expectation.
PromethiumJPM
10/6/22, 2:38 AM
@Sirjocktrainer, Wow! Awesome opening chapter to this story! My money is on a side wager of brothers. Freshman bro usurps 3rd year college bros apartment. Younger man an adept in Magicks. Older bro will come under Adept Bros powers! Even as 1st year is lusting the Head ROTC cunt, he is well on his way to sex it up! Thinking ROTC’y guy becomes a total slutbottom! Our Hero, 1st year at university, and able and willing to focus his Magick in his brothers apartment. Our blooming Mage desires his brother as the next addition for his figures to capture in his desire to have many, multiple, often and open for men who would like to play in John’s Sex ground!

10/6/22, 11:47 PM
@PromethiumJPM Wow, nice thought out plan. And yes it could very well have been a fun way to have taken the story